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Topic: Ecstasy
2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 07:47 AM
Physical attraction
you have it all there
you look my way
we both begin to stare

Like reading each others thoughts
undressing each other in both our minds
erotic thoughts of ecstasy
as we bigin to walk closer
at the very same time

Smiling with desire
our eyes begin to glow
sensual erotic passion
begins to over flow

We know what we both want
in our minds it's very clear
emotions running wildly
as the time is drawing near

I begin to kiss your lips
slowly working my way down
heavy breathing sensual moaning
is the only sound

Off with the clothes
the moment begins to heat
skin touching skin
as our bodies meet

Hearts pounding wildly
as the love making begins
neither of us wanting
this moment to ever end

Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me

Time seems to stop
reality no longer exsists
except the sharing os ourselves
in pure blissfulness

By Daniel
05/03/08

Redsoxfan1's photo
Sat 05/03/08 07:52 AM
Very well done!!flowerforyou I like that one!:heart:

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 07:53 AM
Thank you Red..flowerforyou

Sexyklp4U's photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:02 AM

Physical attraction
you have it all there
you look my way
we both begin to stare

Like reading each others thoughts
undressing each other in both our minds
erotic thoughts of ecstasy
as we bigin to walk closer
at the very same time

Smiling with desire
our eyes begin to glow
sensual erotic passion
begins to over flow

We know what we both want
in our minds it's very clear
emotions running wildly
as the time is drawing near

I begin to kiss your lips
slowly working my way down
heavy breathing sensual moaning
is the only sound

Off with the clothes
the moment begins to heat
skin touching skin
as our bodies meet

Hearts pounding wildly
as the love making begins
neither of us wanting
this moment to ever end

Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me

Time seems to stop
reality no longer exsists
except the sharing os ourselves
in pure blissfulness

By Daniel
05/03/08


very nice:heart: happy

runtbaby's photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:02 AM
very good poet i enjoyed reading it

no photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:03 AM
drinker :smile: drinker

no photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:04 AM
"Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me"

Oh Daniel....lovely! flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

AngelLight's photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:53 AM
"Time seems to stop"


Isn't that the truth! :smile: flowerforyou :heart:

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 09:55 AM
Thank you Sexyflowerforyou
runtbabyflowerforyou
Cypoetdrinker

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 09:56 AM

"Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me"

Oh Daniel....lovely! flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


MsWizard, glad you enjoyed it..flowerforyou :heart:

no photo
Sat 05/03/08 09:57 AM
Daniel, be careful,,,,,,,THESE ladies MIGHT start seeing you with your clothes offnoway lol,OH NEVER-MIND...lol,lol
Just kiddin ya Bro. Nice write......drinker :heart:

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 09:58 AM

"Time seems to stop"


Isn't that the truth! :smile: flowerforyou :heart:


AngelLight.. glad to see you comment on one of my poems...
flowerforyou :heart:

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 09:59 AM

Daniel, be careful,,,,,,,THESE ladies MIGHT start seeing you with your clothes offnoway lol,OH NEVER-MIND...lol,lol
Just kiddin ya Bro. Nice write......drinker :heart:


laugh Thanks Terry, drinker

sasfire75's photo
Sat 05/03/08 12:23 PM
Danielson...I loved it simplly loved it....awesome write sweetie pie:wink: :heart:

2Btrue2One's photo
Sat 05/03/08 03:20 PM

Danielson...I loved it simplly loved it....awesome write sweetie pie:wink: :heart:


As always your thoughts and comments are welcome..
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Sat 05/03/08 08:32 PM
Oh NO!!! Your writting this way too!!!

:wink: :tongue: flowerforyou

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/04/08 01:10 AM
lol... well I figured I would give it a try.. this is my second one like this....:smile: flowerforyou

BonnyMiss's photo
Sun 05/04/08 02:46 AM

Physical attraction
you have it all there
you look my way
we both begin to stare

Like reading each others thoughts
undressing each other in both our minds
erotic thoughts of ecstasy
as we bigin to walk closer
at the very same time

Smiling with desire
our eyes begin to glow
sensual erotic passion
begins to over flow

We know what we both want
in our minds it's very clear
emotions running wildly
as the time is drawing near

I begin to kiss your lips
slowly working my way down
heavy breathing sensual moaning
is the only sound

Off with the clothes
the moment begins to heat
skin touching skin
as our bodies meet

Hearts pounding wildly
as the love making begins
neither of us wanting
this moment to ever end

Kissing and caressing
in total ecstasy
nothing else exsists
except for you and me

Time seems to stop
reality no longer exsists
except the sharing os ourselves
in pure blissfulness

By Daniel
05/03/08

It's getting hot in here..............2Be. what can I say but, very well done.

2Btrue2One's photo
Sun 05/04/08 02:51 AM
Why thank you Bonnyflowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

laughsandgiggles's photo
Sun 05/04/08 08:03 AM
it was a nice write Daniel - honestly not one of my favorites but it was goodflowerforyou

luv ya babebigsmile

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