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A pleasant discourse with some friends was how it all began
Then Neverwas came by; it seemed he had a plan He knew my name, he knew my face, he knew my history I had never seen him anywhere, he was a mystery He acted very nice at first, but then began to crack And when I didn't buy his wares, he stabbed me in the back He said some things about me that I didn't think were kind He started twitching; eyes were bulging- Oh! He's lost his mind So now I know just what he is, it's not what it appears What he says is different from what my heart can hear He is not going to bother me, I really am above that He thinks he knows me! That is rich. Don't you have to love that? |
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Ouch!! I can't believe someone would even TRY to mess with you. HIS LOSS!!!
 You deserve better.......
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Ouch!! I can't believe someone would even TRY to mess with you. HIS LOSS!!! You deserve better....... You are funny! Thanks! 
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Excellent write...
 
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Gotta love it...whimsical.
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Edited by
CleanBathroom
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Sun 05/04/08 07:25 AM
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Someday Hiker, I may look back and realize that you were one of the 3 most important people to enter my life to whom I was not related. If not, you'll still land safely among the top 10! (Depends how the "state" of affairs plays out.)
 You are the Queen of Awesomeness. I pray that whomever this piece references will awaken to the realization that he has unwittingly made a huge tactical error and seeks redemption. excellent prose ... no errors in spelling. BTW, it's not me, is it?  |
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In incredible knack for the English language, you have, my dear. Poor, poor soul Neverwas is to cross paths with The Queen of Awesomeness (thanks for lending me the phrase, CB).
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Discernment is so important when deciding who we let enter our lives.
It's good you are so aware
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Neverwas was just a jerk
who tried to pull your chain he thought he could upset you but his efforts were in vain his pious ways were evil and filled with guilt and shame he thought he was a deity but was truly just insane You saw though him like a Sunday fart You could smell his pungent odor You did it all with just your heart no need for a “jerk decoder” You’ve found your spiritual center and all that this denotes now no one can torment you except your silly goats! |
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Daniel at your service my dear.. let me at him... very nice poem hiker
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Abra!
 Another nice write. |
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nice write h-chick
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Neverwas was just a jerk who tried to pull your chain he thought he could upset you but his efforts were in vain his pious ways were evil and filled with guilt and shame he thought he was a deity but was truly just insane You saw though him like a Sunday fart You could smell his pungent odor You did it all with just your heart no need for a “jerk decoder” You’ve found your spiritual center and all that this denotes now no one can torment you except your silly goats! Ah Abra, I do so love hearing from you. I want to write poems just so that I can see what you respond with. Thanks. |
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Someday Hiker, I may look back and realize that you were one of the 3 most important people to enter my life to whom I was not related. If not, you'll still land safely among the top 10! (Depends how the "state" of affairs plays out.) You are the Queen of Awesomeness. I pray that whomever this piece references will awaken to the realization that he has unwittingly made a huge tactical error and seeks redemption. excellent prose ... no errors in spelling. BTW, it's not me, is it? Not you. He wasn't that great of a speller, actually. |
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All of you - thank you so much. You are a pleasure to share with, each one of you. I am so glad you are here.
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All of you - thank you so much. You are a pleasure to share with, each one of you. I am so glad you are here. I would totally hug you if I lived in the same climate zone.
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All of you - thank you so much. You are a pleasure to share with, each one of you. I am so glad you are here. I would totally hug you if I lived in the same climate zone. Well, start saving for a plane ticket. I am going for the top 3. |
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Ohh those kind are a pain.
They just want to pull your chain. One two three here we go again. Another one that wants to complain. When will it every end. Can they not comprehend? They run in and bash. Throwing around their trash. Old garbage of yesterday. Wish they would just go away.  |
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Ohh those kind are a pain. They just want to pull your chain. One two three here we go again. Another one that wants to complain. When will it every end. Can they not comprehend? They run in and bash. Throwing around their trash. Old garbage of yesterday. Wish they would just go away. I'm sure you deal with his type every day.
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