Only dead fish go with the flow......

Heard it before!

hay redhead!
your not as dark as me!
check out deep-distress.
i like your style!

Not to in-depth but not to shallow
with a meaningfull yet comical flow!

Woop woop!

Thumbs-up!

ahh thanks
from not watching tv as a kid but reading in abdundunce ive a vivid mind when it comes to expressing myself!
the onething i tell people when they ask how i can just flow without writeing it down is Read more BOOKS!
see the words a music and youl know when they fit,it just snaps!

Top-man!
ive just meet her and shes a true dimond.

Its good for covering you window with plactic sheeting whem some muppet puts a rock trough it!
plus i can pop next door to grab a game of pool,but then ive got the gay-lords walking past my yard thinking it cool to be a vandale!

Your welcome,if more young and old people read and watched it thered be far less disgusting words and outrageous outlooks on beautyfull people?
i couldent belive it the first time i watched it,truly horrific that people could do and still hold that view and state of mind?
its your own master-peace! x

Thanks the slight change stops the reader being stumped!

Thanks the slight change stops the reader being stumped!

Its a more than ok!thanks ive deletet Positivly H.I.V as im re writeing it,years of just scribbeling on paper and i was out of practice,like Plastic Pancakes said it needs re lineing!

Thank you may777 I try to write 3D poems with dark content!

Nay-baa-ssss and hollyoaks top corrie pants-down!

From positively H.I.V this is the follow-on...
Its all about that man thats reap,en what he,s sowen
he,s been given that life-time punishment
its judgement
its what he,s owed by god,for living that unforfilled life,
how many times was this man given the chance to be nice
to straighten out his life but he choose to take,
seeing what other people had and he wanted a taste so he took
and when he dident take he shook
and after all these years and now let me tell you how he looks,
resentfull and bitter with a sour and spitfull sneer and a sparkel in his eye
he,s covering it up with sickly charm,
please dont spare this man you pity it might sound harsh but he deserves to die,
being consived and born i consider that a sin
diabolical
he was born a black seed,
never taught the values of common wealth he was jealous from a young-age because he dident have material goods,
growing-up fast
progressing through the scenes
from smoking weed
to droping Es and snorting speed
he,s tooting rocks
and soon its the poisen from the point of that needles what he needs,
by his own greed its condemed him
the grip
no passion in his heart nor love
no shame
the indian-ink noughts&crosses on his arm,the printed ever-present Wasted-Agen and smileing-face,
the extra buckle holes on his belt a constant reminder of his next hit
for even with his malnutrition he,s on top of his world,
wishing...yet he carnt stop through lack of self-esteem,
The ideal product
better than sex
squatting down,back to the wall itching sick
he has to chase so much because he carnt find his veins,
sound advice he,s been advised to get a test...a week later and he,s begging to use the phone
"Have you got some spare change?"
he puts down the receiver
next-day drop-in at nine-A-clock A.M...
he needs a fix.
»
five minutes to the hour and he,s sitting in the waiting-room eye-lids drooping,
his number gets called up...
»
Whhh,,he exhales a deep-breath,
she drew blood without ease
"Come back in four-hours"
enough time for a fix.
»
five minuets to the hour and he,s sitting in the waiting-room eye-lids drooping,
his number gets called up
"Take a seat"
a man and a lady looking intence
"Ahem"he clears his throat
the lady looks uncomfortable and shifts in her chair
"Theres no easy way to say this,you,ve tested positive for H.I.V,its developed into Aids its so far gone,we can offer you Entiretroviral Therapy but..."
the doors already closeing
theres enough time for a fix
he doesent hang around....

It makes me ****ing mad..,...bless her. :(

Love it when its crisp and frosty or snow tho the latter rarely happens in the uk for long,just slush within a day or two!
normaly just rains so im a fan and a moaner at the same time!

Fantastic!,totaly felt it,reminded me of reading and watching Roots,powerful and proud poem just like the man Kunta Kinte the Mandinka fighting man!

:)