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Love, oh sweet, sweet love.
Take me into your arms. Guide me to places I've longed for. Yet let my angel not speak. For her words will crush my wings. Her love has faded and passed. Like my current stature. It now bares no sun. I know what the back of love resembles. Fore I have oft watched it walk away. So, I am to just sit here. On the fence of society and life.. Merely gaze on through pain blue eyes. As she finds her happiness. In the embrace not of my own. Darker clouds shall follow me everywhere. Destined to feel the brisk loneliness. Felt by the sting of the rain. You may have forgotten. I shall forever remember. Oh, love, I hate your sweet curse. The tragedy of all my dreams. |
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very nice
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Love, oh sweet, sweet love. Take me into your arms. Guide me to places I've longed for. Yet let my angel not speak. For her words will crush my wings. Her love has faded and passed. Like my current stature. It now bares no sun. I know what the back of love resembles. Fore I have oft watched it walk away. So, I am to just sit here. On the fence of society and life.. Merely gaze on through pain blue eyes. As she finds her happiness. In the embrace not of my own. Darker clouds shall follow me everywhere. Destined to feel the brisk loneliness. Felt by the sting of the rain. You may have forgotten. I shall forever remember. Oh, love, I hate your sweet curse. The tragedy of all my dreams. WOW...coffee house deep! 
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very nice Thanks. :D |
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WOW...coffee house deep! Coffee house deep? lol, mkay. :] |
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Thumbs-up!
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AWESOME! Reminds me of some of the poetry of Rumi Poems....
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AWESOME! Reminds me of some of the poetry of Rumi Poems....
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Rumi?
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Rumi? As beautiful as you write...you MUST find some Rumi, you write like him! |
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Rumi? As beautiful as you write...you MUST find some Rumi, you write like him! I've never heard of him? o.o Actually.. Never even been told I wrote like any one else.. |
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Rumi? As beautiful as you write...you MUST find some Rumi, you write like him! I've never heard of him? o.o Actually.. Never even been told I wrote like any one else.. Google Rumi..he's all over the place. A ancient Sufi mystic poet from the middle east...what use to be Persia. Beautiful poetry, one of my favorites. |
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nicely done little bro...
 you should read rumi as i know you do appreciate writing and he is a master. a philosopher a poet and an observer of life. you would enjoy him very much.. |
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Also Gibran.... another wonder writer.
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Actually there is a Rumi thread in here somewhere..have not seen it for awhile. It is simply titled..Rumi. If you go back through this forum you will find it eventually...ALOT of Rumi posted.
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Khalil Gibran would definenty be someone you would be interested in as well...good suggestion
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Geez..
Am I the only writer with a name that's easy to pronounce?
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