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Topic:
horoscope poem
Edited by
friendshiponly123
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Thu 09/03/09 08:39 PM
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I took the poem as a sort of description of each sign's personality tendencies, and not as today's actual horoscope..When viewed as a type of personality profile..it is a cute and witty way to describe each one..Well Done!
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Topic:
horoscope poem
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Oh My Goodness, Have you got this little, ol' Taurus...with Gemini tendencies pegged..on both counts... lol..Good Work!
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Topic:
The stories
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Really good, Tammy!.. Creative souls.. Our poems are a part of us and therefore we know them best....Critiquing someone's work is like critiquing their children, I believe.
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Topic:
Cowboy Sense
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Nice..I feel like I'm there on the range, too... Not just any poem can transport you..that's a sign of good writing! Thanks for sharing it!
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Topic:
A Chance With God
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Very good! Don't let the negative feedback bother you...The dark hates the light and will attack it everytime...This is a poem about light.. Thank you for having the courage to share it! It blessed my day..no matter what forum I'm in!
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Wow! So true! This needs to be posted on every street corner in the U.S. Negativity is creating problems everywhere in our society..not just on this site..Thanks! Well Said!
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Topic:
Very Discouraged!
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Oh my Gosh!..I love this site! I just joined a few days ago and began posting tonight and I love reading what everybody writes. I've finally found where all the smart, open, honest,supportive,creative and funny people have been hiding...right here on this site!..Soooo, open up and enjoy, it looks like it's gonna be a great ride!
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Topic:
true story
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His loss, your gain. Keep writing it out..it helps. I like your style of writing, easy to follow and to understand!
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Topic:
Never done this before
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Hi, Korey. I'm new to this,too. Sometimes a friend can have a good idea and knows when you need a little pressure for your own good, too. They can have the advantage of being on the outside looking in and can see things that we don't. So, welcome to a new, exciting frontier! God bless and Godspeed, to ya!
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Topic:
Where is my Prince Charming?
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Does he have an older brother....even a dad maybe..if he does send 'im my way, please!..lol..Good write! Thanks for sharing!
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Topic:
Country boy
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Oh my gosh, Girl!..you gotta get published, if you aren't already! I'm a fan, already!
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Topic:
24/7
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Your poems are so simple, yet, so deep. I really like your style! More, please, more!
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Good writing..good catharsis..thanks for sharing!
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Topic:
Suppositions
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I like this poem very much. Deep if you take the time to ponder it..thanks for sharing it!
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Topic:
Ode to happyhippie
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Another Winner! When's your book coming out..'cause I would buy it, fer sure!
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Topic:
Our Type of Love
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I really like the way you write! thanks for sharing!
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Topic:
The Inviting Kiss (rev)
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Oh MY GOSH!!! Lucky, LUCKY, partner you have!!...be careful, though, you could give an old lady like me a heart attack if you keep writing like that!.. LOL..Very, Very good and extremely well written..thank you for sharing!
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Topic:
We All Need Each Other...
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Great writing! Writing for me is also a way of expressing what is held deep inside..The feelings bubble up and I have no choice but to write them down...Thank you for sharing yours!
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Topic:
Hope
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Absolutely love this write!..can definitly relate to it! Keep writing!
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Topic:
Bikeathon
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Very Good!..I love bikes, too and have some poems..but still a little afraid to put my "babies" (poems) out there, yet. Keep writing..I love to read yours.
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