When I’m sad and I find that I’m feeling so low
Every little thing bothers me, this I know
I admit I have troubles and crosses to bear,
It sounds like I’m whining and don’t really care.


The fact is, I am hurting, my insides are churning,
Even my eyes from the tears, are burning
Thoughts and emotions, causing such struggles,
Maybe I just need to find me some snuggles?


Affection, my goodness! It goes along way,
Rejoice, is the feeling when friends come to say
“Who wrote this,” “I like it! And want you to know,”
“It has good rhythm, and look how it flows!”


I don’t think they mean it they just want me to know,
That maybe it saddens them to see someone so low.
If I could but return to them all that they give,
I know in my heart, they would feel the same privilege.


We all have these days when we find ourselves down,
Write a poem, put your heart in it, lift up that frown!
At Mingle2 in a moment you will certainly see,
People will comment, you’ll feel better, like me!


Just put it all out there, take it right off your mind,
You may actually feel so much freer inside!
And wait, look to the others who’ve posted their comment,
Then run to their aide, don’t wait, jump right on it!


I can tell you this caring that I feel returned,
Has taught me the most beautiful lesson learned.
We all need each other to guide us on our way,
When it is our turn to have a really sad day

deep.

I really like this..and it speaks much truth....

Joseph, you make me smile, lol.
Thank you kik, sincerely

Open your eyes
for those who can't see.
just let it out
don't let them stop thee.
free your emotion
that's how it should be.
You lit the light so others could see.
don't force it
just let it breath.
the light is there,
don't hold back.
reach out and touch,
than it will let yourself free.
i am a friend and im down on my knee.
this poem i write as a complement toward che.
you see, im not afraid what others see,
thats how i write my poem
and that just me.

don't be sad we all here for ya
thats really good che.

i love it.

OMG! WoW, wonderer! Weeeeeeeeaaaaaa1 ai love THAT! What a compliment.. geez I have met some of the kindest people on this site.. I am speechless and for those that know me, THAT NEVER HAPPENS! LOl, wonderer I'm on a hunt to see if you write poems usually, if not, YOU SHOULD! Love that.. thank you my friend
As I reread this, it IS just you, alway encouraging and supporting of those in your world... thx hun!

liked it---

very nice write

Great observations and yup those flows are rollin', both y'all.

Thank you all very much!
Sincerely,
Christine

smiles are the greatest thing in life

Awww Joe, lol Hugzzz!

Thank you bedlum.. I guess it's true, it's all just "words" yet it's the words that make up, and express a persons feelings, thoughts, and definately I agree with you about learning about what that person is thinking and the type of attitude he/she has...
Thank you for your compliment (smiles)! It's really nice to have the peace and comfort which allows 'me at least,' to want to post again.

Nothing like having each other there for one another
Really good write {{{Che}}}

Great writing! Writing for me is also a way of expressing what is held deep inside..The feelings bubble up and I have no choice but to write them down...Thank you for sharing yours!