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WHAT DO YOU WANT RIGHT NOW?
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An Anti-loon raygun... Anyone know how to make one?
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Note to self
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NTS... If you want to chit chat, don't chat chit.
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disappointed.
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Say Something Vague - part 9
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I am waiting for the ancient oracle to sigh and belch forth its foul breath.
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wtf - part 5
Edited by
AdventureBegins
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Wed 09/30/15 11:01 PM
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Cool. A Whiskey Tango Foxtrot thread.
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What do you miss?
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What do I miss? HER.
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How do you get women?
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I think this is what happens. Some guys think they know what women like, want, need etc.. And they run with that. * And then wonder what is wrong with women* Or they are hoping to be feed information, so they can agree with us. * Temporarily anyway * Either way.. I think most women feel they end up doing most of the conversationsal work/ or texting. 3 times this week, I sent messages saying " Please initiate conversation & talk about yourself " It took two of them 2 days to respond. That would be because women (also) use any personal information or conversation to agree with or use our emotions (also). It works both ways. |
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Light Ever Wins
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lol... no worries. You were not nearly as harsh as the literature expert I showed it to. I am the author. Thanks, I rather promote poetics here and wasn't sure if I'd read right, but in review I found this piece a bit lacking. In need of work. Thanks for your level comments. They are appreciated. tommo / Ireland All of that said I will tell you the same thing I told the "expert". "I am under no obligation to make sense to you"... :) |
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Are you happy?
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You can have some of mine...
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Topic:
Light Ever Wins
Edited by
AdventureBegins
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Tue 09/29/15 11:34 PM
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Everybody has their own opinions and I have mine. I've read this piece and pardon me but I find it lacking. I'm so very sorry to advance this rhetoric, but 'tis true. I read into this and looked for flow, but found very little. Aside from the rhyming on the end of each line, when I looked - and read further, little was gained here. Whomever the writer was - I think he/she should go back to the drawing board. Reconstruct and edit. Lend us flavor and the necessary happenstance so that we may accrue depth. I seek this. Forgive my appearing harshness here, my good people. tommy boy moran / Ireland lol... no worries. You were not nearly as harsh as the literature expert I showed it to. I am the author. |
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Light Ever Wins
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The Red Dragon swooped down upon me this nite; dimming my lite. But I will be strong and not let it change me. I did see this coming but thought surely not. He laid down his sword but took a good bite. (Your poem became my reality tonite. Thankfully, my ordeal is over.) Beautiful poem! Thank you! what she said. |
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All the real people are fake
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Did you ever stop to think that some of the fake people are real?
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Are you happy?
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no...
There were joys and exultations in my home today (grandchildren). I am way beyond happy. |
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Light Ever Wins
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Thank you all.
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If you went to a store to get something new would you buy an unwrapped package?
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Can I just borrow a "gigglesnort"... *Gigglesnort* My day is complete. Neener. |
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Topic:
Now what?
Edited by
AdventureBegins
on
Tue 09/29/15 07:13 PM
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Tip Waterloo Make sure she has finished her first cup or you could get eaten a live. |
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Topic:
What Advice Would You Give
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Enjoy the journey.
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Why are you here?
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I am here because there wasn't as much fun.
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To find someone who will love you for no reason, and to shower that person with reasons, that is the ultimate happiness That is so cool. |
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