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Fri 10/02/15 06:03 PM
An Anti-loon raygun... Anyone know how to make one?

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Fri 10/02/15 03:37 PM
NTS... If you want to chit chat, don't chat chit.

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Fri 10/02/15 11:29 AM
disappointed.

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Wed 09/30/15 11:04 PM
I am waiting for the ancient oracle to sigh and belch forth its foul breath.

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Wed 09/30/15 11:01 PM
Edited by AdventureBegins on Wed 09/30/15 11:01 PM
Cool. A Whiskey Tango Foxtrot thread.

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Wed 09/30/15 06:50 PM
What do I miss? HER.flowerforyou

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Wed 09/30/15 05:29 PM

I think this is what happens.
Some guys think they know what women like, want, need etc.. And they run with that.
* And then wonder what is wrong with women*

Or they are hoping to be feed information, so they can agree with us.
* Temporarily anyway :wink: *

Either way.. I think most women feel they end up doing most of the conversationsal work/ or texting.

3 times this week, I sent messages saying " Please initiate conversation & talk about yourself "
It took two of them 2 days to respond.

:banana:

That would be because women (also) use any personal information or conversation to agree with or use our emotions (also).flowerforyou
It works both ways.

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Wed 09/30/15 03:15 PM


lol... no worries. You were not nearly as harsh as the literature expert I showed it to.
I am the author.


Thanks, I rather promote poetics here and wasn't sure if I'd read right, but in review I found this piece a bit lacking. In need of work.

Thanks for your level comments. They are appreciated.

tommo / Ireland

All of that said I will tell you the same thing I told the "expert".
flowerforyou "I am under no obligation to make sense to you"... :)

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Wed 09/30/15 12:12 AM
You can have some of mine... flowerforyou

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Tue 09/29/15 11:34 PM
Edited by AdventureBegins on Tue 09/29/15 11:34 PM

Everybody has their own opinions and I have mine. I've read this piece and pardon me but I find it lacking. I'm so very sorry to advance this rhetoric, but 'tis true. I read into this and looked for flow, but found very little. Aside from the rhyming on the end of each line, when I looked - and read further, little was gained here. Whomever the writer was - I think he/she should go back to the drawing board. Reconstruct and edit. Lend us flavor and the necessary happenstance so that we may accrue depth. I seek this.

Forgive my appearing harshness here, my good people.

tommy boy moran / Ireland

lol... no worries. You were not nearly as harsh as the literature expert I showed it to.
I am the author.

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Tue 09/29/15 11:33 PM


The Red Dragon swooped down upon me this nite; dimming my lite.

But I will be strong and not let it change me. I did see this coming but thought surely not.

He laid down his sword but took a good bite.

(Your poem became my reality tonite. Thankfully, my ordeal is over.)
Beautiful poem! Thank you!






:heart:

what she said.

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Tue 09/29/15 11:28 PM
Did you ever stop to think that some of the fake people are real? bigsmile

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Tue 09/29/15 11:24 PM
no...bigsmile
There were joys and exultations in my home today (grandchildren).
I am way beyond happy.

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Tue 09/29/15 09:15 PM
flowerforyou Thank you all.

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Tue 09/29/15 08:14 PM
If you went to a store to get something new would you buy an unwrapped package?

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Tue 09/29/15 08:11 PM


Can I just borrow a "gigglesnort"...bigsmile



*Gigglesnort*


bigsmile waving

bigsmile My day is complete.
Neener.:banana:

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Tue 09/29/15 07:13 PM
Edited by AdventureBegins on Tue 09/29/15 07:13 PM

Tip Waterloo
Make sure she has finished her first cup or you could get eaten a live.





rofl
surprised

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Tue 09/29/15 07:09 PM
Enjoy the journey.

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Tue 09/29/15 07:07 PM
I am here because there wasn't as much fun.

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Tue 09/29/15 06:46 PM


:heart: To find someone who will love you for no reason, and to shower that person with reasons, that is the ultimate happiness:heart:

flowerforyou That is so cool.

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