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love Of The Night.
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This is pretty good but yu should take abit more time and put some thought and how you feel into it that makes it a good poem.
just some advice from artman33 |
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"Looking for your face" by Rumi From the beginning of my life I have been looking for your face but today I have seen it. Today I have seen the charm, the beauty, the unfathomable grace of the face that I was looking for. Today I have found you and those that laughed and scorned me yesterday are sorry that they were not looking as I did. I am bewildered by the magnificence of your beauty and wish to see you with a hundred eyes. My heart has burned with passion and has searched forever for this wondrous beauty that I now behold. I am ashamed to call this love human and afraid of God to call it divine. Your fragrant breath like the morning breeze has come to the stillness of the garden You have breathed new life into me I have become your sunshine and also your shadow. My soul is screaming in ecstasy Every fiber of my being is in love with you Your effulgence has lit a fire in my heart and you have made radiant for me the earth and sky. My arrow of love has arrived at the target I am in the house of mercy and my heart is a place of prayer. That one is really good |
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"Sex All Days"....by,(((((d4tc))))))...      
Nice |
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Edited by
artman33
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Wed 05/06/09 12:21 PM
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Artman33 Thank you
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Edited by
artman33
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Wed 05/06/09 12:14 PM
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On justsayHi/mingle2.com other then you own?
Thank you artcannon |
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Why Me?
Edited by
artman33
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Wed 05/06/09 12:08 PM
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What did I do wrong this time.
All I do Is work hard for you and I give to you my last dime. I walk away and you already have something to say. What were you doing when I wasn't around" just to her you think I would do you wrong burns me to the ground. Life has broke me. it's me you don't trust but you always complan when I show I need you; I need us. Why me I done nothing wrong but you always give me the breath and tell me just to go on. damn. I'm done I don't want to here it anymore. I rap the rope around my head and pull to here it (seange) I lost hope of us. Why me.. lord this is the end. By:Artman33 5/6/09 |
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Don't go.
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Artman Another good one Thank you so much |
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Don't go.
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Very Nice Write...  
thank you |
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Edited by
artman33
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Tue 05/05/09 06:06 AM
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"life is like dirt.
It’s up to you to plant the garden." "When you are in Love you can't fall asleep because reality is better than your dreams." When I saw you I was afraid to meet you. When I met you I was afraid to kiss you. When I kissed you I was afraid to love you. Now that I love you, I am afraid to lose. Sorry about the typo on the subject. |
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Don't go.
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I have sit here feeling sorry for what I said.
the worlds we spoke to each other. I can't believe I just did. Right now I hate you but I love you to death. so even knowing I don't care it would hurt me so much if you left. I know our world was ripped apart I know you haven't left yet but I miss you with all my heart. maybe I'm sorry I never meant to hurt you. but now I know a man he can be such a fool. so I hope you understand I make mistakes I'm just a man. I know we will make it throu I know we can. but love could kill anyone even superman. but Like so I would turn the world to save you. Baby if you forgive me I don't know. I promise I'll be your superman if you don't go. |
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One tuch...
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Hey artman Nice write! Tammy Thank you Most of the time I just write how I feel. |
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One tuch...
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artman33
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Mon 05/04/09 07:29 AM
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One tuch and I think you might fall apart.
You fall apart and one tuch may bring you together. I know that one tuch would be to much if you tuched me, it could last forever. One feel of your heart makes me feel like I can. One moment with you and I can be your superman. one look into your eyes bring out the light to lift my night into suprize. only you baby I would want one tuch from and only you baby you're my only one. By:artman33 5/4/09 |
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can't take anymore..
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you tell me it's ok
just like everytime before. you promise the world as you walk out the door. where do I start I can't trust what you say it's the same old promise every day I'm starting to think you don't care so I crie as I fall out to the floor. I can't do this. I can't take it anymore. wrote By:artman33 5/1/2009 |
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straight up bruda ^ youre gonna wanna keep her in school, if not for the overly-obvious reasons, let her be because it is what she wants. if you want her to be happy, drop this and instead of trying to talk her out of it, you should support her. thats why youre married. you have to give of yourself, even though it may not make YOU happy, it makes her happy. and seeing her happy should make you happy. seeing a pattern? Thank you I can use this you're right I should be happy and I am as long as she is. but you see she's not happy she is only doing it becouse of her parents I know cause thats what she told me. care to explain? I do want her to go to college but she told me she is going becouse of her parents she's worried what they will say if she takes sometime off. she broke down and cried in my arms two days ago and she said college is really getting to her. so all I want is sometime off so she don't hurt her self. with the stress and all the other stuff that is going on. I said I do want her to go to college understand? |
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I say . the end of the world
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straight up bruda ^ youre gonna wanna keep her in school, if not for the overly-obvious reasons, let her be because it is what she wants. if you want her to be happy, drop this and instead of trying to talk her out of it, you should support her. thats why youre married. you have to give of yourself, even though it may not make YOU happy, it makes her happy. and seeing her happy should make you happy. seeing a pattern? Thank you I can use this you're right I should be happy and I am as long as she is. but you see she's not happy she is only doing it becouse of her parents I know cause thats what she told me. care to explain? I do want her to go to college but she told me she is going becouse of her parents she's worried what they will say if she takes sometime off. she broke down and cried in my arms two days ago and she said college is really getting to her. so all I want is sometime off so she don't hurt her self. with the stress and all the other stuff that is going on. |
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pain..
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Tank you thats means alot to me.
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straight up bruda ^ youre gonna wanna keep her in school, if not for the overly-obvious reasons, let her be because it is what she wants. if you want her to be happy, drop this and instead of trying to talk her out of it, you should support her. thats why youre married. you have to give of yourself, even though it may not make YOU happy, it makes her happy. and seeing her happy should make you happy. seeing a pattern? Thank you I can use this you're right I should be happy and I am as long as she is. but you see she's not happy she is only doing it becouse of her parents I know cause thats what she told me. |
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I don't want her to drop out I want her to take A small bit of time away from college just so she can pull her self together. I think you're pretty selfish - what's your ulterior motive? why do you want her to stop? what do you gain? let her be, mind your business or why not enroll and join her in college? I already have the job that I want. I'm a wrestler and I play guitar for justen super. any how I didn't need college to get it. once again I don't want her to drop out I just want her to take some time off she tells me she needs time off but she don't want to take time off be cause of her parents all I'm saying is she need to go to college for her self it's to teach you about life anyway right. |
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