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Here you are by my side.
Just hanging on for the ride. Trust me,Just look at me and talk into the light as we dance I hold you as you become the Love Of The Night. ------------------ |
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right on!
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Here you are by my side. Just hanging on for the ride. Trust me,Just look at me and talk into the light as we dance I hold you as you become the Love Of The Night. ------------------ Thumbsup woman! Nice |
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This is pretty good but yu should take abit more time and put some thought and how you feel into it that makes it a good poem.
just some advice from artman33 |
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Welcome to our little corner of the internet
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thanks for posting-I look forward to reading more
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