What did I do wrong this time.
All I do Is work hard for you and I give to you my last dime.
I walk away and you already have something to say.
What were you doing when I wasn't around" just to her you think I would do you wrong burns me to the ground.
Life has broke me. it's me you don't trust but you always complan
when I show I need you; I need us.
Why me I done nothing wrong but you always give me the breath and tell me just to go on.
damn.
I'm done I don't want to here it anymore.
I rap the rope around my head and pull to here it (seange)
I lost hope of us. Why me.. lord this is the end.




By:Artman33
5/6/09

Definitely deep...

Gives me a little chill when reading.. But the realism can be dead on in the life of many!! Nice!!

very powerful-we say enough... but the words come easier than the actions sometimes