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Topic: Sweet Angel of Mine
sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 06:48 AM Edited by sasfire75 on Thu 03/20/08 07:03 AM
I dont know how well this is going to turn out but here it goes.. Hello sweet angel of mine. I think of you all of the time. I just want you to know how much I still love you and wonder what you are doing most of the time.You will always be in my heart til the end my time.For then I will be joining you when it is my time. I often think what life would be like if I still had you around in my life at this time.As you know you have two beautiful grandchildren at this time,who will never know you til it's there time.I want you to know that there mom will surely let them know just how sweet an angel you really are.Even though life goes on down here We still think of you all of the time. I know you must know by now that someone very special will be joining you at sometime.I hope when she gets there way up in the sky that you will look after her til it becomes my time. I know you know who im talking about but right now I am going to spend all my time wisely with her til her time comes to be with you.So take good care of her for when my time comes we will be reunited once again then we can enjoy our selves together when that time comes. 3/20/08 By:Shannon This poem is dedicated to my aunt and my mom P.S. I just want you to know it is my aunt that is heaven right now. That it is my mom that will be joining her sometime soon and that it is Daniel that encuraged me to write this poem lasnite

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 03/20/08 06:52 AM
Beautiful Sas!

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 06:54 AM
Beautiful Sas! ty Teddy Daniel encuraged me lastnite to write another poem

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 03/20/08 06:55 AM
beautiful

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 07:04 AM
Ty Pkh

bad_girl Joined Tue 07/17/07 Posts: 67379	Thu 03/20/08 07:39 AM
Sas that is beautiful

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 07:46 AM
Sas that is beautiful ty bad_girl funny thing is I woke up this morning and there it was sitting in my head to post this morning..strange how things become in your head over nite when you arent even thinking about it

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/20/08 08:10 AM
sas, all I can say, is this poem you wrote is absolutely beautiful.. one can feel the love you have for your aunt and mother.. such a wonderful poem..

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76461	Thu 03/20/08 08:13 AM
Beautiful words from the heart

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Thu 03/20/08 08:15 AM
I dont know how well this is going to turn out but here it goes.. Hello sweet angel of mine. I think of you all of the time. I just want you to know how much I still love you and wonder what you are doing most of the time.You will always be in my heart til the end my time.For then I will be joining you when it is my time. I often think what life would be like if I still had you around in my life at this time.As you know you have two beautiful grandchildren at this time,who will never know you til it's there time.I want you to know that there mom will surely let them know just how sweet an angel you really are.Even though life goes on down here We still think of you all of the time. I know you must know by now that someone very special will be joining you at sometime.I hope when she gets there way up in the sky that you will look after her til it becomes my time. I know you know who im talking about but right now I am going to spend all my time wisely with her til her time comes to be with you.So take good care of her for when my time comes we will be reunited once again then we can enjoy our selves together when that time comes. 3/20/08 By:Shannon This poem is dedicated to my aunt and my mom P.S. I just want you to know it is my aunt that is heaven right now. That it is my mom that will be joining her sometime soon and that it is Daniel that encuraged me to write this poem lasnite Beautiful

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 08:38 AM
sas, all I can say, is this poem you wrote is absolutely beautiful.. one can feel the love you have for your aunt and mother.. such a wonderful poem.. ty Danielson lol I did not shed one tear writing this poem but read it three times now and have cried everytime i read it lol you know I even had my mom read it this morning when i posted it..

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 08:41 AM
ty so much for your comments txsgal and LaMom

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/20/08 08:43 AM
sas, all I can say, is this poem you wrote is absolutely beautiful.. one can feel the love you have for your aunt and mother.. such a wonderful poem.. ty Danielson lol I did not shed one tear writing this poem but read it three times now and have cried everytime i read it lol you know I even had my mom read it this morning when i posted it.. You see, I told you that you could do it, just let the words flow from your heart, if you do that, you can never go wrong.. Your brother in Christ Daniel..

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 08:48 AM
sas, all I can say, is this poem you wrote is absolutely beautiful.. one can feel the love you have for your aunt and mother.. such a wonderful poem.. ty Danielson lol I did not shed one tear writing this poem but read it three times now and have cried everytime i read it lol you know I even had my mom read it this morning when i posted it.. You see, I told you that you could do it, just let the words flow from your heart, if you do that, you can never go wrong.. Your brother in Christ Daniel.. lol Danielson you give me too much credit...I write when the mood strikes or if it just comes to me...but it means a lot to me to hear you say you loved my poem...because you are one of the best when it comes to writing poems

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 03/20/08 08:55 AM
Oh no sas, there are many here that are better than myself.. I just write what I feel, but thank you..

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 09:00 AM
Oh no sas, there are many here that are better than myself.. I just write what I feel, but thank you.. That may be true but you will always be one of the best to me...and yvw

princecharming213 Joined Mon 03/17/08 Posts: 102	Thu 03/20/08 10:06 AM
Wow ,Very Beautiful Sasfire

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Thu 03/20/08 12:07 PM
Wow ,Very Beautiful Sasfire ty so much for your comment

fairycatcher31 Joined Sat 01/26/08 Posts: 3680	Thu 03/20/08 01:39 PM
LOVE IT!!!!!

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Fri 03/21/08 09:37 AM
ty fairy im glad you loved it I just everyone to know I woke up yesterday and this poem was in my head....Strange how some poems are ment to be posted and read...Something inside of me told me this is the poem that needed to be read... Sassy