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Topic: Be still my heart
2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 01:16 PM
Be still my heart you make it pound if you listen real close you can hear the sound I can't explain what you have done to me but your in my mind you're all I can see For you I would walk through the gates of hell I would fight to the finish with a loud rebel yell No one could be my match for I draw strength from you with you by my side there's nothing I can't do The wonders of the world would be yours to take the earth would move it would begin to shake You have awakened my heart and my soul I wanted to tell you I thought you should know By Daniel 02/28/08

AnnG1959 Joined Sat 11/10/07 Posts: 161	Thu 02/28/08 01:32 PM
Daniel?? I think your poem is great and if you have written that for your someone special, then she is very lucky. Thank you for sharing it. Ann

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 01:34 PM
Daniel?? I think your poem is great and if you have written that for your someone special, then she is very lucky. Thank you for sharing it. Ann Thank you, unfortunately we have an unwelcome guest..

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76432	Thu 02/28/08 01:36 PM
Great one as always unwelcome guest where I don't see nada no more lmao

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Thu 02/28/08 01:37 PM
Another good write...

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 01:43 PM
Great one as always unwelcome guest where I don't see nada no more lmao Thank you kristi, you remove that didn't you.. you're a sweetheart..

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 01:45 PM
Another good write... Thank you MsTeddy

AnnG1959 Joined Sat 11/10/07 Posts: 161	Thu 02/28/08 01:45 PM
Daniel?? I think your poem is great and if you have written that for your someone special, then she is very lucky. Thank you for sharing it. Ann Thank you, unfortunately we have an unwelcome guest.. You are very welcome Unwelcome guest is gone.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 01:50 PM
Daniel?? I think your poem is great and if you have written that for your someone special, then she is very lucky. Thank you for sharing it. Ann Thank you, unfortunately we have an unwelcome guest.. You are very welcome Unwelcome guest is gone. Yeah, thanks to kristi..

countrybumpkin2u Joined Thu 02/21/08 Posts: 1238	Thu 02/28/08 02:13 PM
DAM IT!!!! EVERY TIME!!

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 02:22 PM
DAM IT!!!! EVERY TIME!! awww, I can't stand to see anyone hurt.. I really didn't mean to make you cry..

Britty Joined Sat 09/08/07 Posts: 3480	Thu 02/28/08 02:30 PM
That was lovely.

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Thu 02/28/08 02:33 PM
That was lovely. Thank you Britty hugs

Nambi Joined Fri 09/14/07 Posts: 259	Thu 02/28/08 03:34 PM
NICE ONE...

ShyKBear Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 368	Thu 02/28/08 05:48 PM
Very nice...love it!

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Thu 02/28/08 07:14 PM
Very nice again

FroznChild Joined Tue 02/19/08 Posts: 2228	Fri 02/29/08 12:58 AM
Well written... a striking, gutteral blow... With Equescent thoughts... FroznChild

sasfire75 Joined Mon 01/21/08 Posts: 3242	Fri 02/29/08 07:03 AM
that was a lovely poem Daniel as always you touch more hearts than you know...

2Btrue2One Joined Wed 06/13/07 Posts: 2447	Fri 02/29/08 11:50 AM
Thank you for all of your replies..

a_brand_new_life Joined Mon 12/24/07 Posts: 31	Fri 02/29/08 05:41 PM
BE STILL MY