If I were
to reach out to you
would you respond in kind
and reach for me too

If I were
to show you my heart
would you take from me
would you tear it apart

If I were
to show you my soul
would you really look closely
would you see my rainbow

If I were
to dry all your tears
would you know with me
you have nothing to fear

If I were
to look in your eyes
would you look in mine
could you see the stars shine

If I were
to begin to cry
would you take me in your arms
would you stay by my side

If I were
to show you my love
would you realize
i'm as gentle as a dove

By Daniel
02/28/08

little too soft for me, but nice write. --- I didn't really visualize what I was reading.

Thanks, not really one of my best..

Daniel that was simply beautiful,I hope you find that special one to share all this beauty with

Very beautiful Daniel

Thanks (((pkh))) (((Marina))).. i'm glad you both like it, I didn't think it was all that great, but thank you both..

Awesome again Daniel and very heartfelt.

aww, kristi you always have such nice things to say.. thank you..

HOW much more can my eyes take!!
You always make me cry.

But I keep coming back for more don't I !

awww, I didn't mean to make you cry..

Daniel<---- reaches out a hand in comfort..

THERE YOU GO AGAIN.
BE STILL MY

awww, gosh, thanks..

Another beautiful write!

Thank you MsTeddy.. *hugs*

If

such a small word with such a large impact


Good one

Very true, it's been said it's the biggest.. Thank you

another beautiful poem sweetie you are the greatest

aww, I don't know about that, there are a lot of very very good poets here.. but thank you sas..

your quite welcome sweetie