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Topic: “Satisfaction”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Wed 02/20/08 08:02 AM
“Satisfaction” I lay my head upon your chest. And away goes all the stress. As I listen to you breathe. I know this is right where I want to be. As I listen to what you say. You take my mind astray. Were there are no worries. And only love applies. As I listen to your voice. It makes me want to rejoice. As I run my fingers through your hair. And our lives we compare. It brings a tune to my heart that I hum. To each we succumb. We speak of the past. And how life has went so fast. Love and life we have weighed. Through this journey we have made. But it seems as I lay my head upon your chest. There is no more stress. Finally we can see. This is right were we wanted to be. No more worries of what will come our way. For we have found what we wanted here today. K.L.M 2/20/08 Aww just thoughts going through my mind of what it could be some day.

DOTTIE Joined Tue 07/31/07 Posts: 2225	Wed 02/20/08 08:03 AM
everything you write is my faveorite, beautiful....

Puffins1958 Joined Tue 02/27/07 Posts: 13637	Wed 02/20/08 08:04 AM
Kristi... Very nice...heartfelt

Mikey117 Joined Mon 11/20/06 Posts: 23736	Wed 02/20/08 08:06 AM
Kristi, thats awesume!!! Now if you would just get my Doll back, you would be my Idol!!!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Wed 02/20/08 08:09 AM
DOTTIE your a doll thank you so much Puffins1958 awww girl thank you have not seen you lately hope all is well Mikey117 your just not right boy shshhhshshs but thanks for reading

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Wed 02/20/08 08:11 AM
To someday! (((Txs)))

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 02/20/08 08:17 AM
(((( Puddin Cup ))))) Beautiful,,, I have a feeling all your dreams are coming true,, Love you

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Wed 02/20/08 08:36 AM
(((( Puddin Cup ))))) Beautiful,,, I have a feeling all your dreams are coming true,, Love you Awww only time will tell someday it will happen. MsTeddy thank you and yes someday it will happen for us both

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Wed 02/20/08 08:42 AM
WELL WORDING THOUGHTS “Satisfaction” I lay my head upon your chest. And away goes all the stress. As I listen to you breathe. I know this is right where I want to be. As I listen to what you say. You take my mind astray. Were there are no worries. And only love applies. As I listen to your voice. It makes me want to rejoice. As I run my fingers through your hair. And our lives we compare. It brings a tune to my heart that I hum. To each we succumb. We speak of the past. And how life has went so fast. Love and life we have weighed. Through this journey we have made. But it seems as I lay my head upon your chest. There is no more stress. Finally we can see. This is right were we wanted to be. No more worries of what will come our way. For we have found what we wanted here today. K.L.M 2/20/08 Aww just thoughts going through my mind of what it could be some day.

klugman Joined Mon 03/19/07 Posts: 1776	Wed 02/20/08 09:22 AM
A very nice feeling to have indeed

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Wed 02/20/08 09:31 AM
A very nice feeling to have indeed hehehe just rub it in why don't ya lol ya know I'm happy for you frank thank you so much for reading.

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 02/20/08 11:51 AM
awesome as always,I feel your dreams will come soon

robertsonm30 Joined Fri 01/18/08 Posts: 79	Wed 02/20/08 04:13 PM
you are an awesome writer

Fadedspirit Joined Sun 12/23/07 Posts: 1681	Wed 02/20/08 05:20 PM
Very nice write TxsGal.

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Wed 02/20/08 08:15 PM
Very nice write TxsGal. Fadedspirit thank you very much awesome as always,I feel your dreams will come soon awwwww pkh one day all of our dreams will come true you will see you are an awesome writer awwwww thank you for your kind words and welcome to this family within these walls

Blackfox12 Joined Tue 12/18/07 Posts: 4330	Wed 02/20/08 09:23 PM
Hot as Heck

jimz Joined Sun 06/24/07 Posts: 2365	Thu 02/21/08 12:31 PM


Unknow Joined Thu 06/14/07 Posts: 2155	Thu 02/21/08 12:51 PM
WOW!!!!!!!!!! This I truly love. I couldnt of written this anyother way... BRAVO>>>>> APPLAUSE...............

shutterguy Joined Thu 08/09/07 Posts: 22516	Thu 02/21/08 01:41 PM
great work sherlock love it and it is a great feeling

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76412	Thu 02/21/08 05:19 PM
Hot as Heck thank you blackfox jimz mteagle31 aww coming from you I'm honored thank you very much. shutterguy aww my friend I have missed your words for a while now. So glad to hear your life has turned around for the best for you and your happy sweet music that is.