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Topic: “Could This Be”
TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Sun 02/10/08 09:42 PM
“Could This Be” It gets harder each night. Knowing I can’t hold you tight. You’re so far away. There will come a day. That it will be. Before me I will see. You are standing there at my side. And then we will see if our worlds collide. Will it be like a rush? Will our faces turn flush? Could it be like a running stream? Or is it all but a dream. At the time we look into each others eyes. Will it be like the stars in the skies? Will we feel like we just reached for the moon? Will we hear our favorite tune? Will our hearts begin to beat fast? Will it start a love that will last? Could it really be? You are the one for me. We will know what to say. When that day comes our way. K.L.M 2/10/2008

openheart45 Joined Sat 03/31/07 Posts: 724	Sun 02/10/08 09:43 PM
awesome

MirrorMirror Joined Fri 10/26/07 Posts: 89680	Sun 02/10/08 09:43 PM


fastlinnie Joined Wed 09/26/07 Posts: 1993	Sun 02/10/08 09:45 PM
great

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Sun 02/10/08 09:47 PM


txscowgirl Joined Thu 01/24/08 Posts: 136	Sun 02/10/08 09:48 PM
cool

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Sun 02/10/08 09:50 PM
Thank you all for reading and for your kind words

DOTTIE Joined Tue 07/31/07 Posts: 2225	Mon 02/11/08 06:30 AM


frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Mon 02/11/08 06:56 AM
patience my friend, the right one does not appear in overnight “Could This Be” It gets harder each night. Knowing I can’t hold you tight. You’re so far away. There will come a day. That it will be. Before me I will see. You are standing there at my side. And then we will see if our worlds collide. Will it be like a rush? Will our faces turn flush? Could it be like a running stream? Or is it all but a dream. At the time we look into each others eyes. Will it be like the stars in the skies? Will we feel like we just reached for the moon? Will we hear our favorite tune? Will our hearts begin to beat fast? Will it start a love that will last? Could it really be? You are the one for me. We will know what to say. When that day comes our way. K.L.M 2/10/2008

MsWizard Joined Sun 07/01/07 Posts: 5488	Mon 02/11/08 07:00 AM
“Could This Be” It gets harder each night. Knowing I can’t hold you tight. You’re so far away. There will come a day. That it will be. Before me I will see. You are standing there at my side. And then we will see if our worlds collide. Will it be like a rush? Will our faces turn flush? Could it be like a running stream? Or is it all but a dream. At the time we look into each others eyes. Will it be like the stars in the skies? Will we feel like we just reached for the moon? Will we hear our favorite tune? Will our hearts begin to beat fast? Will it start a love that will last? Could it really be? You are the one for me. We will know what to say. When that day comes our way. K.L.M 2/10/2008

ArtGurl Joined Sun 04/08/07 Posts: 17722	Mon 02/11/08 09:00 AM
Love it!

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Mon 02/11/08 07:09 PM
Thank you all for reading awww frank nothing happens overnite all within time

kc0003 Joined Fri 05/11/07 Posts: 26382	Mon 02/11/08 07:13 PM
man! you are a hard one to keep up with nicely done once again

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Mon 02/11/08 07:14 PM
man! you are a hard one to keep up with nicely done once again hehehehe you don't know the half of it lmao

frankfk Joined Sun 09/24/06 Posts: 5684	Tue 02/12/08 05:08 AM
Thank you all for reading awww frank nothing happens overnite all within time

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Tue 02/12/08 05:27 AM
really nice,

Differentkindofwench Joined Sat 04/07/07 Posts: 5960	Tue 02/12/08 08:01 AM
As usual, appropriate timing! Ick and woot all at the same time, more woot than ick, so its all good.

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Tue 02/12/08 08:22 AM
(((txs)))

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76436	Tue 02/12/08 09:02 AM
As usual, appropriate timing! Ick and woot all at the same time, more woot than ick, so its all good. Hehehehehe are you saying that our minds actually at times cross the same path on the thinking humm now that is something to ponder