Topic: Tonight
kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 02:19 PM

Nicely done!



thank you

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Wed 01/16/08 02:27 PM
this one does sing out

good job

stef

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 02:44 PM
thank you stef

as always flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 01/16/08 03:00 PM
Maybe you should take their advice. kc

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:33 PM
maybe.....

LightVoice's photo
Wed 01/16/08 03:43 PM
wow ~ that is absolutely breath-taking... the bittersweetness almost too intense...

I am humbled by your ability to bend the human language to express such deep thought & feelings. And I pray with all my might, that this is a work of pure brilliance.. and not born of experience :heart:

Hugs,
Light flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 04:24 PM

wow ~ that is absolutely breath-taking... the bittersweetness almost too intense...

I am humbled by your ability to bend the human language to express such deep thought & feelings. And I pray with all my might, that this is a work of pure brilliance.. and not born of experience :heart:

Hugs,
Light flowerforyou




not worthy of such praise but i do thank you very much

flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 01/16/08 05:52 PM
kc youwriting songs now???

no j/k

good words here

D

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 06:29 PM
thanks ((( d )))

you two have a good night

flowerforyou
drinker

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Wed 01/16/08 06:32 PM
Very good.
Awsome writing!

pkh's photo
Wed 01/16/08 06:34 PM
Kevin that was just amazing,I feel your pain.But I also have been there and we always have hope,and must continue to dream and believeflowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 06:41 PM

Very good.
Awsome writing!


thank you jen
that was kind of you

flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Wed 01/16/08 06:42 PM

i’m getting good at the art of deception
lie to myself to get through
only a few more hours to go now
just to make it-
one more night without you


Great write! And I agree ... definitely hear music with this one! flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 06:46 PM

Kevin that was just amazing,I feel your pain.But I also have been there and we always have hope,and must continue to dream and believeflowerforyou



thank you
i know and you will be happy to learn that i am

bigsmile

pkh's photo
Wed 01/16/08 06:49 PM
That's wonderful I'm happy for you

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Wed 01/16/08 07:08 PM
I was thinkin more 80's hair band that country.......

I like this one kc.....has that lilt to the music feel
great emotions.......two candles for you my friend.....
smokin smokin smokin smokin smokin

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 07:27 PM

I was thinkin more 80's hair band that country.......

I like this one kc.....has that lilt to the music feel
great emotions.......two candles for you my friend.....
smokin smokin smokin smokin smokin



really i get billy joel banging that out for christy brinkley

thank you for the light

drinker

lizethmarina's photo
Wed 01/16/08 07:30 PM
OMG! this one did get to me. It has been 1 month, 8 days and zero hours since the last time I saw the bearer of my heart :cry:

Thanks for writing this KC, very beautiful flowerforyou

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Wed 01/16/08 07:31 PM
:heart: Hearts fill up and we must empty their smiles and fears..Good poem man..bigsmile

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 01/16/08 07:31 PM
That has song written all over it..!!! Great job kc flowerforyou