Topic: Tonight
kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 07:37 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Wed 01/16/08 07:38 PM
flowerforyou


i’m getting good at the art of deception
lie to myself to get through
only a few more hours to go now
just to make it-
one more night without you


Great write! And I agree ... definitely hear music with this one! flowerforyou



artgurl
thank you
you know i appreciate the kind words you give me
maybe one day i will write one that can go into your (mood thread)

Yea right!!!


flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou


kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 07:42 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Wed 01/16/08 07:58 PM

OMG! this one did get to me. It has been 1 month, 8 days and zero hours since the last time I saw the bearer of my heart :cry:

Thanks for writing this KC, very beautiful flowerforyou



i am sorry for your loss

keep writing, a wise man on here (WOLFEYES) told me when i first came here to do that and it will help. you know what he was right. it has

i am glad it touched you, as people we share many of the same things in life so, it seems fair that we should learn from each other.


thank you for taking the time to post

flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 07:45 PM
thank you iam


:smile:

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 08:13 PM

That has song written all over it..!!! Great job kc flowerforyou



blondemom

thank you

flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 01/16/08 09:42 PM
you rawk KC

this one reminds us all that altho being single can be healing, it's still painful

i love this one

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/16/08 10:06 PM
thank you
you are so sweet

flowerforyou

ellgee1976's photo
Wed 01/16/08 10:55 PM
you are too KC..you are too ;)

no photo
Thu 01/17/08 05:14 AM
with a heart that’s seen its share of sadness
and a million stories to tell
i need something to halt all this madness
`cause alone- i’m not doing so well

i’m getting good at the art of deception
lie to myself to get through
only a few more hours to go now
just to make it-
one more night without you

tonight i’m gonna be lonely
yeah tonight it’s gonna be cold
at night time passes so slowly
but it has no problem making me old


Wonderful verses just amazing.....
I don't know how you could improve this one.
Well you can't

sooooooo good

stef



kc0003's photo
Thu 01/17/08 11:00 AM
thanks again ellgee

and thank you too stef


flowerforyou
flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 01/17/08 04:54 PM
bigsmile

lonelywoman37's photo
Thu 01/17/08 07:29 PM
very good job hun

eileena9's photo
Thu 01/17/08 07:30 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/17/08 07:52 PM

very good job hun




thank you for taking the time to post

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/17/08 07:53 PM

flowerforyou flowerforyou


thank you

I appreciate your kindness

flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 01/17/08 07:55 PM
KC..have you been inside my four walls??? :cry: Excellently written

Wolfeyes58's photo
Thu 01/17/08 08:03 PM
KC that was great....I can hear the piano of Billy Joel singing that almost.

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/17/08 08:21 PM

KC..have you been inside my four walls??? :cry: Excellently written




yes will you please let me out???
at least for tonight!

thank you for understanding

flowerforyou

no photo
Thu 01/17/08 08:25 PM


KC..have you been inside my four walls??? :cry: Excellently written




yes will you please let me out???
at least for tonight!

thank you for understanding

flowerforyou


just open the door my friend flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/17/08 08:37 PM
Edited by kc0003 on Thu 01/17/08 08:43 PM



KC..have you been inside my four walls??? :cry: Excellently written




yes will you please let me out???
at least for tonight!

thank you for understanding

flowerforyou


just open the door my friend flowerforyou




i have been, it just took me a while to find the door
why would they paint it the same color as the walls???????

kc0003's photo
Thu 01/17/08 08:53 PM

KC that was great....I can hear the piano of Billy Joel singing that almost.



ok then who do you see??????????????????????

thanks my friend