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I met the Earth mother
in my daughter. Naked we bathed in hot pools. Strange, a reverse nurture. We laughed in the water's strength as ten thousand hands caressed our forgivings. We let go. My womb birthed this beauty and I found humility somewhere between the volcanic heat and her old soul. She never met her father, yet we knew him in the clay and the dusk sky. He spoke to us, just a day before when his brother held her in the longest embrace. The howl lodged in my ribs when he held me too. The blackberry bushes held onto me, asking us to stay longer as we walked barefoot away from the bubbling joy - where we had closed our eyes and were still hearing our ancestors murmerings. . |
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EXCELLENT
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Nice poem .
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When we pale in comparison, we can do nothing but bow.
A magnificent write xoxo |
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When we pale in comparison, we can do nothing but bow. A magnificent write xoxo ❤ New generation. So proud I changed it a little. I met the Earth mother in my daughter. Naked we bathed in hot pools. Strange, a reverse nurture. We laughed in the water's strength as ten thousand hands caressed our forgivings. We let go. My womb birthed this beauty and I found humility somewhere between the volcanic heat and her old soul. She never met her father, yet we knew him in the clay and the dusk sky. He spoke to us, just a day before when his brother held her in the longest embrace. My howl lodged in my ribs. The blackberry bushes scrawny fingers caught me, telling me to stay longer as we walked barefoot away from the bubbling joy - where we had closed our eyes and were still hearing our ancestor's murmerings. Another time and another season, I promised i would return. |
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NICE
Comeback Soon with a new Horizon, As vibrant and innovative in any Seasons. |
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NICE Comeback Soon with a new Horizon, As vibrant and innovative in any Seasons. Thank you Robin Other endeavours keep me busy, bbs x |
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Always Welcome & Pleasure to have great poets like you an reading all your poem's.. Tc.
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Always Welcome & Pleasure to have great poets like you an reading all your poem's.. Tc. Check out poets online. I am but a shadow of the light out there. My poems are a 7.3 on the scale of great poets, according to Autorank |
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Is that so.. Excellent
Everything's takes time to grow, important is how deep are you nourishing the Roots of hold.. Ranking means competition an you are un-comparable |
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Is that so.. Excellent Everything's takes time to grow, important is how deep are you nourishing the Roots of hold.. Ranking means competition an you are un-comparable Your authenticity is refreshing to my weary soul. God bless you and give you your hearts delight Robin xxx |
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Nice poem .
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Thanks You @Ladywind.
Stay Safe. Tc. |
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I want to write like you. I want the beauty found my words to be discovered by each person who reads my work. You are a phenomenal poet. You inspire. You teach. You offer exceptionalism. Your work is like a soul awaiting birth, where each word brings the anticipation of the next word until the hunger for true poetry is fulfilled. Thank you for inspiring me!!
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I want to write like you. I want the beauty found my words to be discovered by each person who reads my work. You are a phenomenal poet. You inspire. You teach. You offer exceptionalism. Your work is like a soul awaiting birth, where each word brings the anticipation of the next word until the hunger for true poetry is fulfilled. Thank you for inspiring me!!
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I want to write like you. I want the beauty found my words to be discovered by each person who reads my work. You are a phenomenal poet. You inspire. You teach. You offer exceptionalism. Your work is like a soul awaiting birth, where each word brings the anticipation of the next word until the hunger for true poetry is fulfilled. Thank you for inspiring me!! Well. Thanks Poet. 3 year anniverary of my loves passing. I like to think he smiles upon our ink. Let us keep it being real ❤. Love to you and yours xxx |
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