Wrap around my body like clothing.
Warped weave is gently closing.
Tailored to be snug fitting.
Stretch around me, snuggle in.

Sew me into your fabric.
I'll zip you up tight.
Your silhouette is fantastic.
You fill that dress out just right.

Tease my dangling fringe,
comb it with your fingers.
Oh please allow me to binge you!
Your scent excites me and it lingers.

Stitching a tear with needle and thimble.
Those undulating curves mmm... so damn nimble!
Watching you dance ignites my passion.
Sexy swerves, that's my kind of fashion.

Let me take-in your waist... just a hair.
Caressing your hips till they're threadbare.
Slip out of that silk and under Egyptian cotton.
I wanna wear you out from top to bottom.

This could be a song, it is quite raunchy. Loved it.

Yeah, I think it flows like a song too. Thanks for checking it out, I'm glad you loved it despite it's raunchiness.

NICE

Nice poem .

Wow I agree! Very nice!

I felt like a voyeur reading this. It was fun and sexy :) I’m thinking the last line
should be just “I want to wear you from top to bottom”, it brings it full circle to
the title question. Just my two cents.

Thanks, Robin.

As always, your acknowledgement is appreciated, Julie.

Hey Carebear. Thanks for checking it out and for your kind feedback.

Bastet, I'm glad it was a fun read for you. I hoped that's how it would be received. Your suggestion is insightful. I agree that simple adjustment makes a significant impact on the continuity of the theme. Also, I think it's a more tasteful way to close. If it were possible, I would edit the line in this post. I have made that change on poetry sites where it's posted. Thank you.

I appreciate that you like the original ending.

Does music come in size lycra? Cool.

Well... I think the way music or poetry is interpreted has the elasticity to be expansive, like lycra. Thanks for sharing some feedback.

I thought the ending was hot.

Raunchy says it best! In the best way possible.

I felt the poem seductively led up to that perfect ending of wearing you out.....

I love this feedback. Thank you both!

My analytical mind likes how as Bastet suggested, removing one word allows the closing line to resolve back to the title, and the metaphor.

My appetite, and my intent to provoke images of desire and vigorous pleasure, favors the original closing line.

I find I want to wear you, just as seductive, if not more so. I mean, you can’t get much
closer someone. :) Either way, it was a treat to read!