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Topic: A day of rest
Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Sat 07/24/21 12:40 AM
We have mooned the day away, with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour.

JulieABush Joined Thu 01/26/17 Posts: 3444	Sat 07/24/21 12:48 AM
Nice poem .

Chivalry Joined Fri 07/23/21 Posts: 3	Sat 07/24/21 01:12 AM
Nice

Laska Paul Joined Sun 11/08/20 Posts: 22880	Sat 07/24/21 01:55 AM
We have mooned the day away, with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour. I think I can't never read other Poems as Lovely as THIS !!

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Fri 08/06/21 03:44 AM Edited by Unknow on Fri 08/06/21 03:44 AM
We have mooned the day away, with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour. I think I can't never read other Poems as Lovely as THIS !!

Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Tue 08/24/21 07:46 AM
NICE

Unknow Joined Sat 04/28/18 Posts: 1861	Mon 08/30/21 10:23 PM
the good memories can stay the rest must go away the remembered will return

Unknow Joined Sat 04/28/18 Posts: 1861	Tue 08/31/21 10:39 AM
very good poem!

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Tue 08/31/21 05:11 PM
very good poem! Thanks DM

Slim gym Joined Tue 05/14/19 Posts: 39394	Tue 08/31/21 05:37 PM
very poetic.... need I say more

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Tue 08/31/21 06:02 PM
very poetic.... need I say more Thank you Slim x

Aatheera Joined Wed 08/04/21 Posts: 429	Wed 09/01/21 12:42 PM
We have mooned the day away, with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour. adorable

Trixie Joined Wed 01/20/21 Posts: 2116	Sat 09/04/21 03:04 AM
We have mooned the day away, with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour. What a beautiful poem my dear friend

Unknow Joined Tue 04/28/20 Posts: 2929	Mon 09/06/21 03:48 AM
We have mooned the day away, with a little cooking, chores and coy smiles. Our one day of rest comes to it's end, as you draw the curtains to catch the evening stars in the opal around your neck. We are silhouettes now, with crescent eyes to satellite and savour each other. "Tomorrow we work, tonight we dream as children dream." She says. "Come my love, let us draw near to God with thanksgiving." He caresses the necklace, kisses the bridge of her nose and pulls her close. "Tomorrow's moon is a promise away." And the moon blushed slighty red and danced to simplicity in the maiden's hour. What a beautiful poem my dear friend Thank you beautiful. Possibly one of my worst poems 🤣🤣

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Unknow Joined Sat 07/10/21 Posts: 54503	Wed 12/15/21 02:47 AM
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