Topic: Haiku
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Wed 06/16/21 05:03 AM
I unpacked
the too hard basket.
Twas simple.



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Wed 06/16/21 05:06 AM
Anybody want to join me?

Japanese Haiku is 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables.
Or 5 syllables, 3 syllables and 5 syllables.

Try...flowerforyou

Slim gym 's photo
Wed 06/16/21 05:13 AM

Anybody want to join me?

Japanese Haiku is 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables.
Or 5 syllables, 3 syllables and 5 syllables.

Try...flowerforyou


Good for you !
To complicated for this ole brain !!!

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Wed 06/16/21 05:23 AM


Anybody want to join me?

Japanese Haiku is 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables.
Or 5 syllables, 3 syllables and 5 syllables.

Try...flowerforyou


Good for you !
To complicated for this ole brain !!!


Urm, you got the syllables wrong laugh flowerforyou

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Tue 07/06/21 04:42 AM
Said she was black and
blue inside.
I painted her gold.

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Tue 07/06/21 04:52 AM
Edited by Unknow on Tue 07/06/21 04:53 AM
Said he was black and
blue inside.
I spoke about rain.



mig25's photo
Tue 07/06/21 06:26 AM
Love this!!!!!

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Tue 07/06/21 06:28 AM

Love this!!!!!


Try :grinning:

Bastet127's photo
Tue 07/06/21 06:39 AM
Morning girl! Traditional Japanese haiku is 17 syllables, 5/7/5 or 7/5/7, deviations
in syllables is senryu. But, as we know, beauty knows no syllables.

sun meets horizon
a red bird sweetly singing
sitting on my sill

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Tue 07/06/21 06:47 AM
Edited by Unknow on Tue 07/06/21 07:00 AM

Morning girl! Traditional Japanese haiku is 17 syllables, 5/7/5 or 7/5/7, deviations
in syllables is senryu. But, as we know, beauty knows no syllables.

sun meets horizon
a red bird sweetly singing
sitting on my sill


I guess it depends what you google my lovely. :grinning: I frankly would prefer more syllables.

Fantabulous that you posted :heart:


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Fri 07/09/21 03:40 AM

Morning girl! Traditional Japanese haiku is 17 syllables, 5/7/5 or 7/5/7, deviations
in syllables is senryu. But, as we know, beauty knows no syllables.

sun meets horizon
a red bird sweetly singing
sitting on my sill


I have been thinking about your post. I do appreciate traditional haiku and the history of haiku. I think my love lies in modern haiku, I think I perhaps dishonour it by changing it.
I can't help it. I guess Jack Kerouac is a little bit of my idol with his individualness and weirdness.
I do not mean to offend.flowerforyou

HaikuAsFunction's photo
Thu 12/30/21 08:48 AM
I have been thinking about your post. I do appreciate traditional haiku and the history of haiku. I think my love lies in modern haiku, I think I perhaps dishonour it by changing it.
I can't help it. I guess Jack Kerouac is a little bit of my idol with his individualness and weirdness.
I do not mean to offend.:hugging:



question about three
modern form unheard by me
would love to know more

Merry's photo
Thu 12/30/21 08:57 AM
Ladywind says
that this is fun, but
I need help!

:sunglasses::expressionless::sunglasses:

Poetrywriter's photo
Thu 12/30/21 09:55 AM
God sends the

gift of love with his

loving heart.





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Thu 12/30/21 10:50 AM

I have been thinking about your post. I do appreciate traditional haiku and the history of haiku. I think my love lies in modern haiku, I think I perhaps dishonour it by changing it.
I can't help it. I guess Jack Kerouac is a little bit of my idol with his individualness and weirdness.
I do not mean to offend.:hugging:



question about three
modern form unheard by me
would love to know more


I hope this helps. Google is your friend. Much more info out there too. :grinning:

http://www.nahaiwrimo.com/home/why-no-5-7-5

Merry's photo
Thu 12/30/21 10:54 AM
God sends the

gift of love with his

loving heart.

:bouquet::bouquet::rainbow::rainbow:

Merry's photo
Thu 12/30/21 10:57 AM
I hope this helps. Google is your friend. Much more info out there too. :grinning:

http://www.nahaiwrimo.com/home/why-no-5-7-5

:bouquet::bouquet::bouquet:

kevin's photo
Thu 12/30/21 03:50 PM
remember
the silence and crunch
deep winter


habituated
longing
overflowing now


earth in me
the vessel swelling
abundant

 Ꮢ Ꭷ Ᏸ ɨ Ꮑ's photo
Wed 01/05/22 12:52 AM
remember
the silence and crunch
deep winter


habituated
longing
overflowing now


earth in me
the vessel swelling
abundant

N:slight_smile:I:slight_smile:C:slight_smile:E