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I unpacked
the too hard basket. Twas simple. |
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Anybody want to join me?
Japanese Haiku is 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables. Or 5 syllables, 3 syllables and 5 syllables. Try... 
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Anybody want to join me? Japanese Haiku is 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables. Or 5 syllables, 3 syllables and 5 syllables. Try...
Good for you ! To complicated for this ole brain !!! |
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Anybody want to join me? Japanese Haiku is 3 syllables, 5 syllables, 3 syllables. Or 5 syllables, 3 syllables and 5 syllables. Try...
Good for you ! To complicated for this ole brain !!! Urm, you got the syllables wrong 
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Said she was black and
blue inside. I painted her gold. |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Tue 07/06/21 04:53 AM
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Said he was black and
blue inside. I spoke about rain. |
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Love this!!!!!
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Love this!!!!! Try 
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Morning girl! Traditional Japanese haiku is 17 syllables, 5/7/5 or 7/5/7, deviations
in syllables is senryu. But, as we know, beauty knows no syllables. sun meets horizon a red bird sweetly singing sitting on my sill |
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Edited by
Unknow
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Tue 07/06/21 07:00 AM
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Morning girl! Traditional Japanese haiku is 17 syllables, 5/7/5 or 7/5/7, deviations in syllables is senryu. But, as we know, beauty knows no syllables. sun meets horizon a red bird sweetly singing sitting on my sill I guess it depends what you google my lovely. I frankly would prefer more syllables.
Fantabulous that you posted 
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Morning girl! Traditional Japanese haiku is 17 syllables, 5/7/5 or 7/5/7, deviations in syllables is senryu. But, as we know, beauty knows no syllables. sun meets horizon a red bird sweetly singing sitting on my sill I have been thinking about your post. I do appreciate traditional haiku and the history of haiku. I think my love lies in modern haiku, I think I perhaps dishonour it by changing it. I can't help it. I guess Jack Kerouac is a little bit of my idol with his individualness and weirdness. I do not mean to offend.
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I have been thinking about your post. I do appreciate traditional haiku and the history of haiku. I think my love lies in modern haiku, I think I perhaps dishonour it by changing it.
I can't help it. I guess Jack Kerouac is a little bit of my idol with his individualness and weirdness. I do not mean to offend.  question about three modern form unheard by me would love to know more |
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Ladywind says
that this is fun, but I need help!  
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God sends the
gift of love with his loving heart. |
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I have been thinking about your post. I do appreciate traditional haiku and the history of haiku. I think my love lies in modern haiku, I think I perhaps dishonour it by changing it.
I can't help it. I guess Jack Kerouac is a little bit of my idol with his individualness and weirdness. I do not mean to offend. question about three modern form unheard by me would love to know more I hope this helps. Google is your friend. Much more info out there too.
http://www.nahaiwrimo.com/home/why-no-5-7-5 |
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God sends the
gift of love with his loving heart.  
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I hope this helps. Google is your friend. Much more info out there too.
http://www.nahaiwrimo.com/home/why-no-5-7-5 |
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remember
the silence and crunch deep winter habituated longing overflowing now earth in me the vessel swelling abundant |
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remember
the silence and crunch deep winter habituated longing overflowing now earth in me the vessel swelling abundant N  ICE
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