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My body reacts as you come into view
My brain scrambles at the thought of you I love your hair and the way that you walk My tongue gets so tied I can’t even talk We share no words or a single greeting You pass me by, the moments are fleeting You don’t know my name or even how I look But I learned more from you then any book For I went to that spot for several days in a row The days turned to months and you never did show I learned to act upon my hearts desires To seize every moment before it expires By Don Zimmerman 1/10/2015 |
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Nice poem .
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NICE ONE
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soo well written ☺ enjoyed reading
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Nice poem
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Indeed,it was a great poem. Do you have any tips you would like to share Aatheera on writing great poetry?
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Indeed,it was a great poem. Do you have any tips you would like to share Aatheera on writing great poetry? It just comes out of my emotions in words, really not an expert, just learning to write them.. happened to read your versions today and you write them well |
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