Topic: Open letter to a girl
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Sat 12/26/20 11:05 AM
My body reacts as you come into view
My brain scrambles at the thought of you

I love your hair and the way that you walk
My tongue gets so tied I can’t even talk

We share no words or a single greeting
You pass me by, the moments are fleeting

You don’t know my name or even how I look
But I learned more from you then any book

For I went to that spot for several days in a row
The days turned to months and you never did show

I learned to act upon my hearts desires
To seize every moment before it expires

By Don Zimmerman
1/10/2015

JulieABush's photo
Sat 12/26/20 02:13 PM
Nice poem:thumbsup: :wink: .

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Sun 09/12/21 07:55 AM
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Aatheera's photo
Fri 09/17/21 02:24 AM
soo well written ☺ enjoyed reading :blush:

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Tue 11/02/21 11:18 AM
Nice poem

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Tue 11/02/21 06:17 PM
Indeed,it was a great poem. Do you have any tips you would like to share Aatheera on writing great poetry?

Aatheera's photo
Wed 11/03/21 12:05 AM
Indeed,it was a great poem. Do you have any tips you would like to share Aatheera on writing great poetry?

It just comes out of my emotions in words, really not an expert, just learning to write them..

happened to read your versions today and you write them well :slight_smile: