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        Emerald Eyes
       
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      You write beautiful poetry. Continue to harness your creativity and your writing will get even better.  
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        Emerald Eyes
       
      
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      Thanks for sharing. 
     
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        Eat or be Eaten
       
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      Nice. I like the flow of your poetry. 
     
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        Love 
       
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      I enjoyed reading your poem. 
     
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        Ego, unity wisdom
       
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      Good poem.
     
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      Good. 
   
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        forever and again
       
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      I agree  
   . Displaying all those things to someone can make a world of difference sometimes. Be blessed.  
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        poetry for the uninvited
       
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      Wonderful poem. You write well. 
   
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        uninvited outside the box
       
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      Great job! Is this your first contribution to the forum Jeena?
     
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        Topic:
        Peasants Beneath the Hill
       
      
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      Very interesting perspective...
 
  That line "leaving dough for evening bread" gives a double meaning. ![]()  
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        Peasants Beneath the Hill
       
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      Very enjoyable to read.
     
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        Heal and be in peace! 
       
      
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      I enjoy reading your poetry. Your poetry stays with me,so much so that I find myself remembering some of the lines without effort. 
      
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        forever and again
       
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      I enjoyed reading your poem, Bittersweet. 
     
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        Topic:
        mantra
       
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      Simple yet delightful to read.
     
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        Topic:
        mantra
       
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      Good. Nice rythmic poem. 
     
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        Unheard Prayers
       
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      That's great. I enjoyed reading your poem a great deal. 
     
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        Soulmate
       
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      That's nice.
     
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        Lonely forever! 
       
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      That's a very good question. I await the answer.
     
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        Celebrate the Light in You! 
       
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      A really great gem this one 
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        And Another Treat
       
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      Thanks Peppa... Sorry for the similar titles for my poems,I know it may been a bit confusing. 
     
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