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Be nice I wrote it when I was 11
Life is good life is great All you have to do is wait Living in a hurry Makes life blurry Times will get bad You'll always feel sad And whenever you could You say: "Whatever happened to my childhood." |
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That's fantastic, and written at the age of 11! Thanks for sharing.
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11 years or now-words still hold true-good words!
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wow!!
the things you could put to prose now... 
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Nice!
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Very Nice hun
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wow !!!! thanks such a deep thought for an eleven year old, you must have loads of good stuff to post by now, I await your next one!
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Wow! Written at 11. Very good.
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very good,hope we see more
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At 11 sshshshshshs I did not start writing till I was 48 ya go girl very good would like to see more.
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That was good!
Welcome to the poetry section! 
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