The Architect

I would have loved you...
forever.

My heart is big enough.
Though,
my hands too small to grasp,
all I wanted to give you.

Love.
Life,
and all that means.

I would have loved you forever.

I placed you on a love carved pedestal.
And offered my hand,
that you not fall.

I`m left holding the broken clasp of,
a once strong chain forged,
of good intentions.

Not for lack of effort,
do I satisfy this destiny.
Rather,
lack of success.

For I, am the architect of
failure.
And I have completed
my greatest work..

Still,

I would have loved you...
forever

Good write buddy..... nexr rime, try walking beside them holding hands

Very good

ty npp...i will walk more...

ty tg3333...

ty too artgirl...

Ohhhhhhh your greatest work my friend in not done yet,,, you have so much more of life to live,, love and explore,,,

hugs

mom.. thank you

Interesting...makes me think of the guy who tries to hard to win the love of his woman, only to drive her away...

never seen this one kc

nice feel to it

stef

Very few manage to pass the actual feel of how, and when, this happens...
Congratulations... exceptional.

With Equescent thoughts...
FroznChild

you are a beautiful soul,and far from a failure

Very beautiful KC