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Topic: At Dawn
Dustyrose Joined Sun 10/07/07 Posts: 11	Wed 10/10/07 06:58 PM
At dawn, with mist in the air, There's a child born, beautiful and fair, It's warmed by, the suns' heat, It's chilled by, the dewy sheet, The mother lies, in the grass, The long hard burden, lifted at last, The love that twinkles, in the eyes, Across the sky, an eagle flies, It takes a breath, of newfound life, Takes it's first steps, to survive, Then the day, begins to glow, For the fawn, and the doe.

CATBW56 Joined Tue 02/20/07 Posts: 7224	Wed 10/10/07 07:01 PM
very nice

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Wed 10/10/07 07:01 PM
There you go dusty....very pretty indeed

jenn_82 Joined Thu 12/07/06 Posts: 1407	Wed 10/10/07 07:03 PM
aww that was very nice

no_psychos_please Joined Sat 07/21/07 Posts: 1131	Wed 10/10/07 07:05 PM
I welcome you Dusty and thank you for sharing and being my friend

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Wed 10/10/07 07:23 PM
very nice hope to see more

TxsGal3333 Joined Tue 09/05/06 Posts: 76393	Wed 10/10/07 07:32 PM
Awesome Welcome to the site hope to see you post more

trustingfate Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2040	Wed 10/10/07 08:36 PM
Wonderful dusty!!! Love it!!

LAMom Joined Tue 12/12/06 Posts: 26866	Wed 10/10/07 10:28 PM
Welcome Dusty,,, Awesome

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