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Topic: first time here so be kind
kc0003's photo
Wed 10/10/07 05:44 PM
Pieces of my broken dreams tumble to the beaten path

quietly,hauntingly,hopelessly love slips through an open door,

as if un- touched by the very lives it once held together.



Darkness fills my once bright eyes.

Now, destiny crams herself down my throat.

Only the bitter taste of sorrow survives where there is no light.



Something inside me cries,

what's left of me slowly dies.



Shattered lives fall softly back to their wombs,

and death comes swiftly to those who can not fight.



Great walls construct themselves around a now occupied one person shell,

where I awake,

alone.



At night, the voices and laughter of my fate keep me awake.

I wonder, as I grow weary, how can a heart in pieces,

still beat.


Loneliness eats my will,

misery accompanies me in your stead.

Still I wonder,

In a world full of people, does anyone else know,

we are all just one mistake, one break-up, one death away,

from,

madness

no photo
Wed 10/10/07 05:46 PM
Very nice! Glad to see you posting here! flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 10/10/07 05:46 PM
t/y

Mystique42's photo
Wed 10/10/07 05:48 PM
Welcome to JSH! Good job! Hope to see more of your work!flowerforyou

blonderockermom's photo
Wed 10/10/07 05:51 PM
very nice kc & welcome to JSH :smile:

catchme_ifucan's photo
Wed 10/10/07 05:55 PM
drinker Hiya M, Just venturing out now??

kc0003's photo
Wed 10/10/07 06:04 PM
actually this the first time anyone has seen my stuff. thank you for your kindness

pkh's photo
Wed 10/10/07 06:09 PM
very niceflowerforyou

wouldee's photo
Wed 10/10/07 06:11 PM
waiting for the poem of your heart filled with joy and glee...Should prove equally brilliant!!

kc0003's photo
Wed 10/10/07 07:22 PM
not sure i would have used the word brilliant but, i do appreciate it.

i will try but, sad comes much easier and way more frequent

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 10/10/07 07:35 PM
Very Niceflowerforyou



Welcome to the sitebigsmile

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Wed 10/10/07 07:52 PM
Very nice poem... flowerforyou
Welcome to the poem section!

no_psychos_please's photo
Wed 10/10/07 08:00 PM
We do madness here, loneliness, friendship, heartache, failire, support... A typical mishmash of dysfunctional friends..... a family. laugh

Welcome! drinker

crimsonphoenix's photo
Wed 10/10/07 08:18 PM
very good poem, good length. welcome, to the family of music makers and dreamers of dreams. welcome to jsh. keep up the good work! bigsmile drinker

kc0003's photo
Wed 10/10/07 08:47 PM
tx,bear,no_, crimsom i thank you all. i am humbled by the response. i wish i had found this place long ago.

s1owhand's photo
Wed 10/10/07 09:13 PM
excellent flowerforyou ty for sharing

kc0003's photo
Wed 10/10/07 09:57 PM
:smile: ty

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/10/07 10:25 PM
yes very nice indeed flowerforyou flowerforyou

shutterguy's photo
Wed 10/10/07 10:26 PM
welcome love the poem great job



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kc0003's photo
Thu 10/11/07 06:20 AM
thanx again mom

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