You stand before me shouting at me
Telling me that I live in a fantasy world
That I need to face reality
What you do not know is I live in reality
My reality may not be your reality
Or the worlds reality
I do know what goes on outside of my own reality
I am aware of the world
My reality allows me to be me
Your reality allows you to be you
So don't stand there shouting at me
About reality
I live in it
Day to day
I see more than you could ever possibly see
I am aware
I am here...

sounds like someone pissed ya of there chubby

Your words beautifully express a Universal Truth

(((Sis)))

Ya tell them g/f hell ya

Ah the beat of a different drum.....

beautiful!!! awareness brings on a reality few will ever understand......but you do *smiles* Peace and Light!

Amazing what the closed minded truly consider reality....

I think reality just sunk in so to speak...you tell them girl and don't back down.

Another one I've been through,touched me as always,love you girl HUGS

But what constitutes an individual's "reality?" How is that reality defined? And by saying that you'll see more than he/she will ever see in their reality, doesn't that make you guilty of the same elitist opinion as the other individual...that your reality is superior?

Reality is, as the poem touches on, completely subjective. But while the poem, on the surface, fights the idea that one subjective reality is better than another, it undercuts itself by saying that the speaker's reality is the ideal.

Thats just what you read into it writerdude..

You totally live in reality girl, glad you stood your ground....way to let it out(((Hugz)) to you my friend

writerdude, my head is twisting, everytime I hear someone talk about subjective reality and other aspects of reality, it makes me wonder of your own reality, and to touch on this subject on an individual poem makes it all sound like nonsense, so I guess, William Blake, Hesse, Jack K, Ginsberg, and all the souls who made "subjective" reality, need to read your thread and maybe take an algebra class instead, open up your mind, and the only way that kind of critism helps is when you critisize yourself, that's the only way to learn of reality, anyway peace to you

Don't know how I missed this It is nice to know Cherubs exist with human emotions and we have one among us

If ya see cupid around, have him shoot an arrow up a certain ass so they will stop being a critic and start sharing some love

BTW jimz GOOD SHOW MY BROTHER!!!!!

when someone like you calls me your brother, I'm in some cool company, I've learned, to learn from the wise, and you are one

Ohhhhhhhhhhhh wow left for a bit and wow is all I can say,,,

Open minds and hearts will allow one to fully engulf's ones heart and soul and then allow you to enter into there Reality,,, Ohhhhhhh my Jenni,, Reality you live in so beautifully,, so gracefully,,, Passion and Fire burn within
and within my reality I live in your soul.......

Hugs and love