Topic: crazed
trustingfate's photo
Wed 10/03/07 03:18 AM
Wracked with pain, my life goes on
My heart insane, my dreams are gone
And yet I weave, and yet I feel
And yet believe that love is real
Beyond the mist, beyond the haze
A heart still kissed, a mind still crazed
Winding, turning, running, lost
Never learning caring costs
Smiling heartaches without tears
My simple beauty hides my fears
While in the night a wournful cry
My daytime vistage, mocking, denies...

BonnyMiss's photo
Wed 10/03/07 04:33 AM
I love this poem, it has great depth to it.It left a vestige in my mind. flowerforyou flowerforyou

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Wed 10/03/07 04:47 AM
Ahhh the dark beauty once again..I love this side of you Trustingfate...flowerforyou

Puffins1958's photo
Wed 10/03/07 05:16 AM
flowerforyou flowerforyou

trustingfate's photo
Wed 10/03/07 05:51 AM
you all make writing a pleasure... thanx

no_psychos_please's photo
Wed 10/03/07 06:53 AM
A pleasure we willingly fuel with our pleas for more!!!!!

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Wed 10/03/07 07:58 PM
I don't know how I missed this one.
Another well written thought trustingfate

LAMom's photo
Wed 10/03/07 08:32 PM
very nice indeed flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 10/04/07 12:57 AM
this one hits the spot very good girlbigsmile flowerforyou

tmay2000's photo
Thu 10/04/07 06:05 PM
i realy like this poem it so emoton filled i LOVE IT

trustingfate's photo
Thu 10/04/07 09:11 PM
thank you...there's not many places I feel comfortable opening my soul....you are all so kind

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Sun 10/07/07 10:17 PM
wow J I really love ur poem

pkh's photo
Sun 10/07/07 10:47 PM
very niceflowerforyou

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Tue 10/09/07 01:54 AM
flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 10/09/07 03:58 AM
hurts a little bit flowerforyou