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Topic: The Pheonix
trustingfate Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2040	Mon 10/01/07 04:18 PM
The pheonix reborn. The future burns. A tiny bird which cannot yet fly perches on a pile of ashes which acts as it's nest. It knows it's wings need yet to grow before it can fly--but in knowing it cannot yet fly, it grows, knowing simply it will someday fly-live-love-burn to ashes, and be reborn. It knows this and smiles, for the fear has burned away. It smiles because it is alive, and today is a new day.....

ObscureLight Joined Mon 09/24/07 Posts: 5410	Mon 10/01/07 04:22 PM
Much truth spoken in these words trustingfate Beautifully written as well

blonderockermom Joined Wed 08/08/07 Posts: 6886	Mon 10/01/07 04:24 PM
very lovely indeed

ChubbyCherubPoet Joined Fri 10/06/06 Posts: 23222	Mon 10/01/07 04:28 PM
rebirth in the form of the Phoenix...beautifully worded

coryM18 Joined Mon 09/17/07 Posts: 442	Mon 10/01/07 04:35 PM
trustingfate,are you into mythology or fiction ( or both)?

MsTeddyBear2u Joined Fri 04/06/07 Posts: 22031	Mon 10/01/07 04:37 PM


trustingfate Joined Tue 09/25/07 Posts: 2040	Mon 10/01/07 04:41 PM
I'm into both...and the reality that hovers in the shadows of all fiction. The inspiration behind the words, and the soul behind the heart.

no_psychos_please Joined Sat 07/21/07 Posts: 1131	Mon 10/01/07 05:01 PM
Awwwww... the Phoenix.. a mythical creature colored beautifully by a poet of mythical beauty

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Mon 10/01/07 05:09 PM
very nicely written

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