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You found me while browsing one day My eyes caught yours Bewitching you, mesmerizing you Your breath caught, heart stopped Started again now pounding intensely You thought to your self..if only Time passed, you browsed again My eyes catching you each time Your breath catching each time Your heart stopping and starting each time Pounding harder and harder each time You kept coming back to me, my eyes Holding you in thier spell You saved my picture To gaze deeply into my eyes when you pleased Hoping yet fearful Why you asked yourself over and over Why would she want me Thinking your self too old for me I noticed you, each time you looked at me Each time you saw my eyes I looked at you,my heart pounded My breath catching I thought to my self..if only If only he would want me I looked again and again Asking my self why over and over Why would he want me Thinking myself too big, too messed up for you Wanting to reach out to you Bravery over took me I did something I never would do I wrote to you Said a simple hello that I had noticed you notice me You answered back Asked to be friends My heart pounding I wrote back saying yes Exchanged emails Exchanged Instant messenger The next day we talk Each of us shy and apprehensive The question of age comes up I tell you how I feel I don't see age It matters not to me Wanting you to see hopefully That I want you Dance around the subject with words Flirting in our own way You become brave Tell me you like me I tell you I like you too More than a friend It blossoms from those words Love meant to be You and me Fate answering our prayers Bringing two pure hearts together |
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Poet...
OMG...that was beautiful honey He's lucky...your both lucky...to have found each other....... |
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Brought a smile :) Good Job- Particularly loved the line:
"Dance around the subject with words" |
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OMG that was just beautiful again you words sound like my life,and I wish you both all the happiness in the world.
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Very Very Pretty
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Beautiful Poet.
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((((( Jenni ))))))
My heart sings a song of Joy,, I am so happy for you,, may this journey you two take bring many heart felt moments,, Dance the Dance of life together sing the songs of queens,, for you my sweet friend, daughter and confidant are a amazing loving caring giving women and deserve all the happiness in the world,,, Muahhhhhhhhhhhh I love you |
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Poet ... well done AS USUAL ..... :) ....
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Amazing, poet...loved it
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Awesome g/f
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Loved it and am very happy for you.
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~B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L~
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I love it!!!!! And I am smiling this big ------->
Love and happiness to you girlfriend! |
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