Topic: Bewitching Eyes
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Thu 09/13/07 06:00 AM

You found me while browsing one day
My eyes caught yours
Bewitching you, mesmerizing you
Your breath caught, heart stopped
Started again now pounding intensely
You thought to your self..if only

Time passed, you browsed again
My eyes catching you each time
Your breath catching each time
Your heart stopping and starting each time
Pounding harder and harder each time

You kept coming back to me, my eyes
Holding you in thier spell
You saved my picture
To gaze deeply into my eyes when you pleased
Hoping yet fearful

Why you asked yourself over and over
Why would she want me
Thinking your self too old for me
I noticed you, each time you looked at me
Each time you saw my eyes

I looked at you,my heart pounded
My breath catching
I thought to my self..if only
If only he would want me
I looked again and again

Asking my self why over and over
Why would he want me
Thinking myself too big, too messed up for you
Wanting to reach out to you

Bravery over took me
I did something I never would do
I wrote to you
Said a simple hello that I had noticed you notice me
You answered back
Asked to be friends
My heart pounding
I wrote back saying yes
Exchanged emails
Exchanged Instant messenger

The next day we talk
Each of us shy and apprehensive
The question of age comes up
I tell you how I feel
I don't see age
It matters not to me
Wanting you to see hopefully
That I want you

Dance around the subject with words
Flirting in our own way
You become brave
Tell me you like me
I tell you I like you too
More than a friend
It blossoms from those words

Love meant to be
You and me
Fate answering our prayers
Bringing two pure hearts together

Puffins1958's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:10 AM
Poet...

OMG...that was beautiful honey
He's lucky...your both lucky...to have found each other.......

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crazyblueyes's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:11 AM
Brought a smile :) Good Job- Particularly loved the line:

"Dance around the subject with words"

pkh's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:13 AM
OMG that was just beautiful again you words sound like my life,and I wish you both all the happiness in the world.flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

Mandie44105's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:14 AM
Very Very Prettyflowerforyou

karmafury's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:24 AM
Beautiful Poet.flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

LAMom's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:25 AM
((((( Jenni ))))))

My heart sings a song of Joy,, I am so happy for you,, may this journey you two take bring many heart felt moments,, Dance the Dance of life together sing the songs of queens,, for you my sweet friend, daughter and confidant are a amazing loving caring giving women and deserve all the happiness in the world,,,

Muahhhhhhhhhhhh I love you :heart: flowerforyou :heart:

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Thu 09/13/07 06:35 AM
Poet ... well done AS USUAL ..... :) ....

blonderockermom's photo
Thu 09/13/07 06:35 AM
Amazing, poet...loved it:smile: flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Thu 09/13/07 09:30 AM
Awesome g/fbigsmile

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Thu 09/13/07 11:33 AM
Loved it and am very happy for you.

MsTeddyBear2u's photo
Thu 09/13/07 11:51 AM
~B~E~A~U~T~I~F~U~L~
flowerforyou :heart: flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 09/13/07 12:34 PM
I love it!!!!! And I am smiling this big -------> bigsmile

Love and happiness to you girlfriend!

flowerforyou