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Topic: A Blurb
littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Fri 09/20/13 02:08 PM
A Blurb Give me a simple poem a poem for the common man not too complicated one I'll know he'll understand a poem can be good without thee or thou just a simple verse without the dramatic pow to the point, just short and sweet not three pages long composed on a cell, perhaps just a tweet so here it is, here's my stinker a simple poem surely, not for a heavy thinker rate it a two or maybe just a one it's only a blurb written just for fun

Leigh2154 Joined Sun 10/02/11 Posts: 16479	Fri 09/20/13 02:22 PM
Excellent!

littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Fri 09/20/13 02:36 PM Edited by littlelambkin on Fri 09/20/13 02:37 PM
Thanks sugar

pkh Joined Sat 05/26/07 Posts: 14961	Fri 09/20/13 02:46 PM
Great write

littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Fri 09/20/13 02:55 PM
tanks, ya you bet'cha

sparkyae5 Joined Thu 03/28/13 Posts: 1595	Fri 09/20/13 03:44 PM
its a 10,,,,loved it,,,ya have a lot of talent young lady...

littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Fri 09/20/13 04:38 PM
Gosh, he,he your embarrassing me (really) thank you sparks

GYs41 Joined Thu 09/05/13 Posts: 149	Fri 09/20/13 07:31 PM
What positive and inspiring comments. I too agree! Imagine what lies ahead for you. Please keep the ink (or the keystrokes) flowing.

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sat 09/21/13 05:12 AM
Well written, little. Say's it all. Very true, poems do not need to be lengthy and with ' thee' and 'thou' - that's for sure. Anyway, this piece says and Does it all. Nice! tomo ===

littlelambkin Joined Mon 02/25/13 Posts: 92	Sat 09/21/13 06:20 AM
Thank you "G" Thank you Tommy I respect both of you and your poetic authority and appreciate the very generous positive feedback. You guys are great!

tommyboy1101 Joined Sat 11/24/12 Posts: 1352	Sat 09/21/13 10:24 AM
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