Topic: Shattered
oldhippie1952's photo
Sat 08/17/13 06:45 PM
Shattered

I thought I could
Entrust you with a shattered heart
But you gave it back
Torn and broken apart

So I will slink back
Into my hole and pull
A rock over me and
My darkness

No one will ever
Find me again
I am tired of
Sorrow and pain

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Sat 08/17/13 06:46 PM

Shattered

I thought I could
Entrust you with a shattered heart
But you gave it back
Torn and broken apart

So I will slink back
Into my hole and pull
A rock over me and
My darkness

No one will ever
Find me again
I am tired of
Sorrow and pain





So heartfelt.....

oldhippie1952's photo
Sat 08/17/13 08:09 PM
Thanks 2kmflowers

pkh's photo
Sat 08/17/13 08:11 PM
Very heartfelt hope your ok

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Sat 08/17/13 08:14 PM

Thanks 2kmflowers




(((( hippie))))flowers :heart:

oldhippie1952's photo
Sun 08/18/13 12:46 AM

Very heartfelt hope your ok



I am very unhappy at the moment...thanks for asking.

pennyg281's photo
Sun 08/18/13 01:42 AM
brokenheart flowerforyou (((HUGS))
Hoping things get better for you my friend.

Yashawanth's photo
Sun 08/18/13 02:38 AM
smokin :thumbsup: drinks smokin

tommyboy1101's photo
Sun 08/18/13 04:46 AM
Old, well said. A great poetic refrain. I agree with all of your words herein. Brings to mind my past real and only loved one. Ah, but, she's a slut, that one!! slaphead Anyway, this piece read very well.

tommy boy

PS: Again, nice poem, old. :thumbsup:

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oldhippie1952's photo
Sun 08/18/13 06:54 AM
Thank you penny, yashawanth and tommyboy.

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Sun 08/18/13 06:55 AM
Sorry to hear this Hippysad2 ....A song for you:heart:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WWs1-NEV9O0

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Sun 08/18/13 12:18 PM
shattered means you have heart.

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Sun 08/18/13 12:33 PM
Sorry for your pain hippie...

drinks

Sharris's photo
Sun 08/18/13 02:17 PM
silence for you..deep thoughts..for you.

jemare's photo
Sun 08/18/13 07:56 PM
Hippie: The right person will have good glue in their pocket. Keep the shattered pieces in a safe place until then.

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Sun 08/18/13 08:10 PM
...You have a beautiful heart that will find 'the one'...

oldhippie1952's photo
Mon 08/19/13 12:14 PM
Thank you for the song, Leigh
Thank you for reading teasing
Thanks kik for sharing my pain
Thank you for your thoughts Sadie
Thank you Jemare for telling me to look for glue!
Thank you ainjel for your kind words

mowildflower's photo
Mon 08/19/13 01:06 PM
waving waving

Life is about changes. Remember you have lots of people who care about you. flowerforyou flowerforyou

oldhippie1952's photo
Mon 08/19/13 02:46 PM
Thank you wildflower for your words.