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Interests: Dancing, Movies, Out Door Fun, Sports, Volunteer, Friends
7 things about me -I'm a pro at both talking and listening, it seems like people are drawn to me for my friendly ear and advice. -I am a very laid back person who doesn't need to do anything special to have fun. -I am down to earth and although a bit shy Im very easy to talk to, so ask me anything. -I am very trusting and forgiving and overall want to help and make other people happy. -I like to go for random adventures, and I love movies of all kinds. -I like to learn new things and try new things whenever the opportunity arises. -I like art and martial arts as well ***Talk to me, you'll find out more.*** How others see me -Friends describe me with 5 words loyal, smart, dependable, caring and reliable What I am looking for -Laid back -Has an open mind -Isn't quick to judge others -Doesn't play around -Has a good sense of humour -Likes to be active and have fun! Someone to have a good time with for the long hall, possibly into sports and music and enjoys spending time with family. Profession: I will tell you later Physical Appearance Height 6' 0" Hair color Brown Body type A few extra pounds Ethnicity White / Caucasian Lifestyle Marital Status Never married Have Children? No Smokes? No Religion Christian - Other Want Children? Yes Drinks? Occasionally |
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Very nicely written and very honest. Nice job!
Perhaps add another picture of yourself in less formal attire. |
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What you have is alright. But, there are thousands of men on this site. Do you think alright will be enough?
I suggest losing the list format and going for a more conversational style. It'll give the reader a better sense of who you are. |
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That's a good profile, very strong and clear, and it has a good photo with a nice smile. The only thing I would say that maybe needs to be balanced is that it comes across as a little too formal.
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Are you applying for a job, or looking to meet people?
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