Topic: Rate my profile and tell me what you think
WillCherishYou's photo
Mon 01/21/13 09:39 PM
Interests: Dancing, Movies, Out Door Fun, Sports, Volunteer, Friends

7 things about me

-I'm a pro at both talking and listening, it seems like people are drawn to me for my friendly ear and advice.
-I am a very laid back person who doesn't need to do anything special to have fun.
-I am down to earth and although a bit shy Im very easy to talk to, so ask me anything.
-I am very trusting and forgiving and overall want to help and make other people happy.
-I like to go for random adventures, and I love movies of all kinds.
-I like to learn new things and try new things whenever the opportunity arises.
-I like art and martial arts as well

***Talk to me, you'll find out more.***

How others see me

-Friends describe me with 5 words loyal, smart, dependable, caring and reliable

What I am looking for

-Laid back
-Has an open mind
-Isn't quick to judge others
-Doesn't play around
-Has a good sense of humour
-Likes to be active and have fun!
Someone to have a good time with for the long hall, possibly into sports and music and enjoys spending time with family.

Profession: I will tell you later

Physical Appearance

Height 6' 0"
Hair color Brown
Body type A few extra pounds
Ethnicity White / Caucasian

Lifestyle

Marital Status Never married
Have Children? No
Smokes? No
Religion Christian - Other
Want Children? Yes
Drinks? Occasionally

jorusi63's photo
Tue 01/29/13 04:10 AM
Very nicely written and very honest. Nice job!
Perhaps add another picture of yourself in less formal attire.

TexasScoundrel's photo
Tue 01/29/13 10:04 AM
What you have is alright. But, there are thousands of men on this site. Do you think alright will be enough?

I suggest losing the list format and going for a more conversational style. It'll give the reader a better sense of who you are.

Tritorium_Theory's photo
Tue 01/29/13 04:57 PM
That's a good profile, very strong and clear, and it has a good photo with a nice smile. The only thing I would say that maybe needs to be balanced is that it comes across as a little too formal.

motowndowntown's photo
Tue 01/29/13 04:58 PM
Are you applying for a job, or looking to meet people?