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ocean's wave
she drew a heart in the sand with some benevolent bark that had washed ashore vertically she drew from the waters edge inward about six hand lengths up, no more she watched as the ocean would gently unravel spilling sea further into her heart each time foamy, it would retreat water's brush stroke taking with each passing, part of her heart leaving behind only untouched wet sand until her heart was no longer only now, part of the sea beneath the setting sun ocean's wave. (( for poppashroom, your uncle, best friend, gone too soon, r.i.p.   ))
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Condolences poppashroom.
She^^^ said it better :-) |
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With great regret your lost of your uncle. Poppashroom
Turn the sea inside out, like it. 
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Thank you so much
Bastet you know I love you Gliding the currents x x |
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My condolences poppashroom..
Bastet, beautiful.. |
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So, sorry to hear poppashroom....
Beautiful write..... 
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My condolences poppashroom..
bastet this touches me deeply. Wonderful piece |
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A GREAT visual, clearly saddening as time and tides,,pass through.
A taste of looking back,,at all they felt, yet forever as two. Sorry for the loss of your Uncle,,PS....know he's always with you in your heart.
Excilent write and passage bastet,,,
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thank you all, i am truly honored
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thank you all for reading, your comments are always so appreciated!!
you're welcome poppashroom, hugs and love across the ocean x x |
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sad..,
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poppashroom...so sorry for your loss...bastet-what a wonderful write to make tribute for the loss...how often have any of us done exactly that...made a heart in the sand and watch as it's washed away...
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thanks for reading aja and laura!!
waves across the ocean x x |
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thanks for reading aja and laura!!
waves across the ocean x x I am always honored and privileged by you |
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Any holiday with gatherings makes you miss the loved ones not there. Papashroom I hope your loss has been lightened with wonderful memories.
Bastet, this was a beautiful poem and I enjoyed the visuals of the ocean along with the sentiment there
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Any holiday with gatherings makes you miss the loved ones not there. Papashroom I hope your loss has been lightened with wonderful memories. Bastet, this was a beautiful poem and I enjoyed the visuals of the ocean along with the sentiment there
Bastet made my loss easier, she writes beautifully |
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Edited by
bastet126
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Sun 05/13/12 03:37 PM
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one of my favorite writes, for a multitude of reasons.
jemare ~ thank you, very kind.
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one of my favorite writes, for a multitude of reasons.
Why you don't write more begs belief, you write like no other, you have such beauty with words |
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one of my favorite writes, for a multitude of reasons.
Why you don't write more begs belief, you write like no other, you have such beauty with words oh gosh, that is too high a pedestal amongst amazing writers here, you included. but, i curtsy ((and i do write alot, just
the personalness of them keeps them at bay most of the time...)) |
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one of my favorite writes, for a multitude of reasons.
Why you don't write more begs belief, you write like no other, you have such beauty with words oh gosh, that is too high a pedestal amongst amazing writers here, you included. but, i curtsy ((and i do write alot, just
the personalness of them keeps them at bay most of the time...)) Not me , I write little |
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