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msharmony's photo
Mon 07/18/11 08:13 PM
Hey minglers,,,

my teen son is getting serious about his music and starting to work on some things,, he would love feedback on a song he made with his cousin,,,,

thanx

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C-y78Bh3Bw&feature=youtu.be

boredinaz06's photo
Mon 07/18/11 08:46 PM
How old is he? This isn't bad, but I must say this type of music is not my cup of tea. I would suggest backing off the robot vocals a little and not rely so heavily on them and create a better hook. Tell him to start sending his stuff out to producers and radio stations, you never know what someone will hear.

msharmony's photo
Mon 07/18/11 09:44 PM

How old is he? This isn't bad, but I must say this type of music is not my cup of tea. I would suggest backing off the robot vocals a little and not rely so heavily on them and create a better hook. Tell him to start sending his stuff out to producers and radio stations, you never know what someone will hear.



thanx, hes 18 and thats what I told him. He is learning and loves the autotune feature for some reason. Im trying to get him to go with no vocal enhancement, but its gonna be a while,,lol



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Mon 07/18/11 10:30 PM
I think he will go far!drinks
I do totaly agree with boredinaz06.

mightymoe's photo
Mon 07/18/11 10:40 PM
actually, it is pretty good, singing and the mixing was excellent! he might have a good shot at something there... good luck to him

:thumbsup: :thumbsup:

msharmony's photo
Mon 07/18/11 11:44 PM
fingers crossed,,,he loves music,,,,Im hoping he can make a living doing something he loves,, so few of us get to,,,flowerforyou

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Thu 08/04/11 07:14 PM
Edited by Up2Us on Thu 08/04/11 07:59 PM
Ok... I could hear his concept..... The flow was a little off. Sounds like he has good vocal potential....smokin

Ask him to study & listen to the following styles it might help.

Yellow Magic - (Electronic Musical flow - chaos with concept)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bgUC5sIqoKw

Zapp & Roger - More Bounce To The Ounce (Funk & Mix)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lK6wOG_aDl8

THE TEMPTATIONS "I WISH IT WOULD RAIN" (Vocals & Harmonies)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyaJnbQfcX8&feature=related

Oldies: 1960 Soul Singers - He can copy & search their names on Youtube, and study their styles. Theses examples & styles can help him reach his vocal potential.
http://www.roadhouseoldies.com/bestcd.html

winterblue56's photo
Thu 08/04/11 07:37 PM

Hey minglers,,,

my teen son is getting serious about his music and starting to work on some things,, he would love feedback on a song he made with his cousin,,,,

thanx

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C-y78Bh3Bw&feature=youtu.be


I thought it was very impressive! Personally, I liked the mix that he used...very catchy tune. I would have liked to seen them in person on the video singing it. flowerforyou

msharmony's photo
Fri 08/05/11 02:17 AM

Ok... I could hear his concept..... The flow was a little off. Sounds like he has good vocal potential....smokin

Ask him to study & listen to the following styles it might help.

Yellow Magic - (Electronic Musical flow - chaos with concept)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=bgUC5sIqoKw

Zapp & Roger - More Bounce To The Ounce (Funk & Mix)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lK6wOG_aDl8

THE TEMPTATIONS "I WISH IT WOULD RAIN" (Vocals & Harmonies)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tyaJnbQfcX8&feature=related

Oldies: 1960 Soul Singers - He can copy & search their names on Youtube, and study their styles. Theses examples & styles can help him reach his vocal potential.
http://www.roadhouseoldies.com/bestcd.html


thanx up,, with the exception of yellow magic he has actually watched me perform those other tunes for years,,,lol

he seems to 'appreciate' it, but his preference remains the Nikki Minaj, Chris Brown, Drake, Rihanna,,,,styles...

msharmony's photo
Fri 08/05/11 02:18 AM


Hey minglers,,,

my teen son is getting serious about his music and starting to work on some things,, he would love feedback on a song he made with his cousin,,,,

thanx

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3C-y78Bh3Bw&feature=youtu.be


I thought it was very impressive! Personally, I liked the mix that he used...very catchy tune. I would have liked to seen them in person on the video singing it. flowerforyou



ty, he certainly loves being seen,,,lol

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Thu 08/18/11 03:19 PM
Edited by exxman on Thu 08/18/11 03:20 PM
I have listened to it a few times. It's not a bad song or mix.:thumbsup: :thumbsup: Best of luck to him. :smile:

POPcorn108's photo
Thu 08/25/11 12:02 AM
Your son has a good voice! Tell him to get in touch with Kanye West's rep and get him started like Usher did with the Biebs lol But he's got some potential. the lyrics are interesting as well. :banana:

msharmony's photo
Thu 08/25/11 12:06 AM

Your son has a good voice! Tell him to get in touch with Kanye West's rep and get him started like Usher did with the Biebs lol But he's got some potential. the lyrics are interesting as well. :banana:



Our first step is moving out to california, but I do know the importance of networking,,, thanx for the advice.

YaYa1962's photo
Thu 09/08/11 11:44 PM
I appreciate his style and very much enjoyed it, raising 4 kids and youngest is all into his style....I believe if he did another, ask him to slide a little dubstep in with his style, that would make another genre really great.....(: Congrats on having such a talented young man......


msharmony's photo
Thu 09/08/11 11:48 PM
awww.. thanx YaYaflowerforyou

I will certainly show him what you posted,,,

RainbowTrout's photo
Fri 09/09/11 12:03 PM
I like the mellowness of the song. I listen to trance a lot. My favorite is the French Rivera sound. I was wondering if he would consider doing nature sounds in his music.

http://smoothriviera.weebly.com/uk.html

RainbowTrout's photo
Fri 09/09/11 12:12 PM

I like the mellowness of the song. I listen to trance a lot. My favorite is the French Rivera sound. I was wondering if he would consider doing nature sounds in his music.

http://smoothriviera.weebly.com/uk.html


http://www.facebook.com/smoothriviera

Sandelwood4's photo
Fri 09/09/11 12:47 PM
I liked it very much. The autotune feature is fun. However, I wouldn't use the autotune because it sounds too generic, but I know from composing myself that we must do what suits us and what's fun to us. The music itself and mixing was impressive and I really mean that. :thumbsup:

illumastorm's photo
Sun 09/25/11 07:31 AM
kinda reminds me of 009 sound system. does he know that group? not bad though.

msharmony's photo
Sun 09/25/11 08:11 AM
here is another he did (rap style) with his good friend,,,

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=IP7voy1tXQA&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL

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