Topic: My Heart
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Wed 07/11/07 06:15 PM


I could only dream about you
The way you look and how you feel
What it would be if I held you
How unbelievably surreal

My heart is through the paces
Of this roller coaster fling
The ups and downs unyielding
As I soar beneath your wing

You've sent me instant romance
When I wake and in my sleep
A private land so intiment
Our souls holding on so deep

With every rush theres waiting
For the hour to begin
When I feel you deep inside
Underneath my skin

A whisper creates the doorway
A smile beyond all bliss
The tension lasts a lifetime
Before your cyber kiss

The waiting is the hardest part
When your patience stands the test
Ready to throw it all away
Just to put your heart to rest

When everything is spinning
And you feel like fading away
Before you open up to someone
That swears to never betray

Moments like this are fragile
An unwritten story that might grow
If you want to dream forever
My love I will always show


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sandylou2456's photo
Wed 07/11/07 06:25 PM


Beautiful sweetie....flowerforyou

buttons's photo
Wed 07/11/07 07:07 PM
nice darlin!laugh laugh :wink:

frankfk's photo
Wed 07/11/07 07:19 PM
My heart goes out with ur wordingflowerforyou

summerlady's photo
Wed 07/11/07 07:27 PM
Very nice, Sweet.

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Thu 07/12/07 04:47 AM
Bearifically beautiful again my very dear friend.There are so many tender feelings & emotions poured into this Poem.I am sooo happy 2 see U writing & expressing them sweetheart.My greatest wish for U though is that this love & cyber kiss transcends directly in2 real-time/real~world
as if fired by the truest arrow from a cupid's bow & finding it's true bearer.I luv this read sweetheart bearifically so.(((((bear~huggies)));=)
:smile: :tongue: flowerforyou :heart: blushing embarassed

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Thu 07/12/07 07:47 AM
Very well written ... excellent .. :)

pkh's photo
Thu 07/12/07 08:15 AM
Very beautiful

Wharf_rat's photo
Thu 07/12/07 04:00 PM
Nice.... very nice:smile:

FriendsFirstKim's photo
Thu 07/12/07 04:19 PM
Nice....very nice....