Topic: the apple, a modern day adam and eve | |
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the apple, a modern day adam and eve (concerto)
opus no. 2 her make up, smeared clothes, disheveled in a pile upon the floor the sheets a heap and scents of love making still lingered in the air what time is it? the curtains drawn no shadows cast and the absolut tasted bitter now and stale the half burnt cigarette opus no. 3 the birthday party over the top moon bounce a big hit moreso even for the grown ups catered babysitter presents wrapped by fifth avenue's finest nothing short of lobster and caviar for the kiddies under the tents within the white picket fence night gave way to stars and string lights little feet all sent to slumber three times a year for much ado hardly seemed a bother opus no. 5 grim is the reaper knocking unexpectedly for whom the bell tolls no one ever listens quietly enough in all the dirty deeds the one that can put them there is always within reach if we just grab it and hold on she never thought to look to see who it was coming for opus no. 1 fuschia with hints of daisies lilacs fresh upon the senses the breeze could not have been more perfect music and laughter linen white and sunshine butterflies and rainbows happily ever afters drifting through the summer air buzz of well dressed children one might even say frolicking grand in every way yet so tender and purposeful this day in sickness and in health till death part us. opus no. 4 he sat on the edge of the too well made bed staring out into the silence of the walls all the frozen memories lingering on her smile how the corners of her mouth... and how her eyes always lit up the.... and her laughter... it all invaded him now he fiddled with his wedding band the missing oh how he hoped she would his silence disrupted by his tear that landed on the bed next to the watch of his best man. |
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..loved..
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Very nicely done,,,,
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You're are very creative.....
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...and out of the shadows comes a gem. well done!
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This is nice . . . really nice.
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I enjoyed reading that.
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I admire how you write
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wow, a great wakeup to see all who have visited!! kind words from many of my favorite reads. *a curtsy* thank you!!!
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wow, a great wakeup to see all who have visited!! kind words from many of my favorite reads. *a curtsy* thank you!!! |
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Extremely creative. I wished I had read it sooner.
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Extremely creative. I wished I had read it sooner. but, you read it now, and i thank you |
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'like'
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