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Topic: That F-Word
ArtGurl's photo
Sun 05/29/11 01:10 AM
I see the way you look at me
I feel when that sweet embrace hello
Lingers just a little longer than …

Friends

That F word
I know I said it
But you’re messed up
And I can take heartbreak
But not from …

You

Six foot two
Mischievous grin and a glint in your eyes
And lips I want to …

Kiss

I’ve thought about it you know
Tracing with my tongue
So close I can feel you …

Breathe

I look for reasons to touch you
And hold my breath
To not get lost in your

Cologne




But it's great cologne ...

mig25's photo
Sun 05/29/11 03:26 AM
I love this write. I truly do. Simple yet powerful.

bastet126's photo
Sun 05/29/11 07:18 AM
the power of temptation magically written! flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Sun 05/29/11 10:03 AM
nicely done (S)

always nice to read you.....:heart:

Sharris's photo
Sun 05/29/11 12:27 PM
Playful, so enjoyed...

rara777's photo
Sun 05/29/11 01:12 PM
I need to go take a "cold" shower.:wink: laugh

Greatly written (((ArtGurl)))smooched flowerforyou

no photo
Sun 05/29/11 08:54 PM
Loved it..

Dragoness's photo
Sun 05/29/11 09:08 PM
Great write Artflowerforyou

I can kinda relate. I have a neighbor, whoo hoo, the attraction is strong but too young and I do not like to "mess" around home because when it goes bad it is in your face everyday.

no photo
Mon 05/30/11 12:01 AM
The friend who just stays alive,
within your thoughts you see their eyes.
That one think about, when you turn out your lights.
Thinking, wonderig, what they might be doing tonight..


Its Great reading you again Art,,,and your charm of wit,,,
completes IT....drinker :wink: :banana:

no photo
Mon 05/30/11 09:25 AM
"'Friends you kiss breathe cologne'? No wait, I'd better read this properly..."

A cracking flirty and tender little number, this poem ought to be served after dessert on a summer verandah at sunset.

And us 6'2" guys don't nearly get enough poetry shout-outs, so big props for that.

drinker

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 05/30/11 06:56 PM
Thank you so much for reading and for your comments

((Mig25)) ((bastet)) ((Kev)) ((Sharris)) ((Ed)) ((Ainjel)) ((Dragon)) ((Terry)) ((Jezz)) :heart: flowerforyou



Dragon - ooh that attraction sounds nice! I know what you mean though ... not so nice if it goes bad. scared flowerforyou

Thanks for sharing Terry. flowerforyou

Jezz - I like that bigsmile flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Tue 05/31/11 10:40 AM
It is tough when the feelings are there but we can't go there....good write

ArtGurl's photo
Thu 06/02/11 10:30 PM
Indeed it is ... thank you (((Kristi))) flowerforyou

Jess642's photo
Fri 06/03/11 02:46 AM
Breathe the cologne of the friends you kiss...flowers

DTHRomeo's photo
Fri 06/03/11 10:37 AM
flowerforyou

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 06/04/11 11:54 PM

Breathe the cologne of the friends you kiss...flowers



indeed! :heart:

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 06/04/11 11:55 PM

flowerforyou


my Romeo flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Sun 06/05/11 08:28 AM
"I like that" bigsmile :heart:

ArtGurl's photo
Mon 06/06/11 05:52 PM

"I like that" bigsmile :heart:



bigsmile smooched flowerforyou





winterblue56's photo
Tue 06/07/11 05:33 PM

I see the way you look at me
I feel when that sweet embrace hello
Lingers just a little longer than …

Friends

That F word
I know I said it
But you’re messed up
And I can take heartbreak
But not from …

You

Six foot two
Mischievous grin and a glint in your eyes
And lips I want to …

Kiss

I’ve thought about it you know
Tracing with my tongue
So close I can feel you …

Breathe

I look for reasons to touch you
And hold my breath
To not get lost in your

Cologne




But it's great cologne ...


Very nice flowerforyou

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