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I see the way you look at me
I feel when that sweet embrace hello Lingers just a little longer than … Friends That F word I know I said it But you’re messed up And I can take heartbreak But not from … You Six foot two Mischievous grin and a glint in your eyes And lips I want to … Kiss I’ve thought about it you know Tracing with my tongue So close I can feel you … Breathe I look for reasons to touch you And hold my breath To not get lost in your Cologne But it's great cologne ... |
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I love this write. I truly do. Simple yet powerful.
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the power of temptation magically written!
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nicely done (S)
always nice to read you..... |
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Playful, so enjoyed...
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I need to go take a "cold" shower.
Greatly written (((ArtGurl))) |
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Loved it..
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Great write Art
I can kinda relate. I have a neighbor, whoo hoo, the attraction is strong but too young and I do not like to "mess" around home because when it goes bad it is in your face everyday. |
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The friend who just stays alive,
within your thoughts you see their eyes. That one think about, when you turn out your lights. Thinking, wonderig, what they might be doing tonight.. Its Great reading you again Art,,,and your charm of wit,,, completes IT.... |
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"'Friends you kiss breathe cologne'? No wait, I'd better read this properly..."
A cracking flirty and tender little number, this poem ought to be served after dessert on a summer verandah at sunset. And us 6'2" guys don't nearly get enough poetry shout-outs, so big props for that. |
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Thank you so much for reading and for your comments
((Mig25)) ((bastet)) ((Kev)) ((Sharris)) ((Ed)) ((Ainjel)) ((Dragon)) ((Terry)) ((Jezz)) Dragon - ooh that attraction sounds nice! I know what you mean though ... not so nice if it goes bad. Thanks for sharing Terry. Jezz - I like that |
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It is tough when the feelings are there but we can't go there....good write
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Indeed it is ... thank you (((Kristi)))
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Breathe the cologne of the friends you kiss...
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Breathe the cologne of the friends you kiss... indeed! |
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my Romeo |
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"I like that"
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"I like that" |
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I see the way you look at me I feel when that sweet embrace hello Lingers just a little longer than … Friends That F word I know I said it But you’re messed up And I can take heartbreak But not from … You Six foot two Mischievous grin and a glint in your eyes And lips I want to … Kiss I’ve thought about it you know Tracing with my tongue So close I can feel you … Breathe I look for reasons to touch you And hold my breath To not get lost in your Cologne But it's great cologne ... Very nice |
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