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Is that yours, Iam4u? If so, it's pretty grand. lol,,glad you both liked,,,, |
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Cheers!
I really did like that. Did you make it up on the spot? |
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Cheers! I really did like that. Did you make it up on the spot? I hit the post button,,and type it...and think it,,,this can sometimes take me awhile,,lol but thats my writes or poems ever done here.. |
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Okay, talented poet man, I did it.
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TAKE AWAY MY EYES
government oppression makes us violent as Russians f***'ed up on vodka packing AK-47s Our leaders pleasures, anti-terrorism measures raping our rights and our nations treasures the children are jaded, their innocence faded 2010, I can't believe we've made it This far in time without everybody dying nuclear winter at the drop of a dime take away my eyes so i can not see what you've done to the land of the free it used to stand for justice and liberty but all i see is self-inflicted misery capitalism's a prison with silent emissions a need for greed i see but nobody's winning we're slaves to our minds our perceptions our times we're eaten everyday like McDonald's fries take away my eyes so i can not see what you've done to the land of the free it used to stand for justice and liberty but all i see is self-inflicted misery -Causality |
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Wow, that was amazing. Great write!
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why; thanks.
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if I told you my reality you'd say I have a great imagination, if I told you my imagination you'd say I've lost touch with reality.....
It doesn't get any darker than the soul of a poet. Poe is the forefather |
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I have to agree with that, Huck, my soul is blacker than tar, I guess that's why my poems are improving.
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Probably my favorite stanza of any poem, ever, is by Poe.
"And all my days are trances, And all my nightly dreams Are where thy dark eye glances, And where thy footstep gleams — In what ethereal dances, By what eternal streams." I didn't eat for about two weeks at lunch so I could save up the money to get his collected works. |
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I love Poe. I used to have a collection of his work, I had forgotten til you reminded me...I lost it.....
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this is my soul
You Can't Hurt me Resounding echoes awaken the child demons in the attic beckon unto him stark fear grips his Vick's laden chest shivers vibrate rusty springs of down footsteps creak closer upon loose floorboards while steamed filled pipes play taps a somber teddybear snarls causing the world to be still foolish nuns, God doesn't want to "get me" the sting of a ruler splinters a left hand blood spurts upon faces of laughter evil little boy too wicked for a mother affliction runs in the family Florence became flop because she always fell polio never whipped her *** just abused her now and then she healed with a smile Even humility has its price Jimmy Dean wore sunglasses maybe his eyes were bloodshot or maybe he was a child of an alcoholic and they became part of his attire degenerate eye disease, masturbation spattering or battering does it really matter when you can't see or understand the difference between ADD and ADHD Psych 101: Crack can be Prozac Iron gates surround a new residence protecting the innocent who peer from outside rehabilitation means refining bad habits like those on the outside who have mastered them twelve years of bars and games people play provide an education unto itself seclusion can be the deciding factor between murder or suicide self righteous judges choose life recidivism is a revolving door of vicious cycles with no engines only propellers called co-dependants or co-defendants, take your pick life repeats itself over and over only the circumstances change yet the merry-go-round stops when the flowers are arranged Why are most tombstones gray scared, afraid to die are you saved? from what, ourselves you can't hurt me |
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That was awesome.
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Huck - what were you thinking when that picture of you was taken?
I'm honestly interested to know. |
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ha ha, I went to the first annual poetry reunion of a site I moderate, I rode my motorcycle (sportsbike) the whole way to Ohio (Lorain) and I know exactly what I was thinking.....that ride was awesome, but I'm too old for this s--t.....
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Since we're discussing pics, Plastic, that really isn't my fav pic of yours.....
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If you look up "chronic green" that's what comes up.
I love the way diseases look under microscopes. It's E Coli. But from a far enough distance it just looks like a beautiful green. Besides, I'm holding out until I get a bicep pic going. Interesting story, Huck. |
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Careful, you might get perverd by old ladies who like young guys with killer biceps.....
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Sometimes I hate being such a ****ing downer.
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It happens, kid.
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