Topic: In retrospect ...
ArtGurl's photo
Mon 01/11/10 09:39 AM
Lost in a maze
A haze
Of a brain
Left to drain
On its own
How do you
Die
With a life
Half lived
To reconcile
Appease
The disease
That feasts
On your
Memory
Taunting
Possessing
Caressing
Professing
How do
You
Live
When you’re
Already
Dead
And the sky
Doesn’t fall
Smashing down
On your
_ _ _ _

That 4-letter word
Your daily
Bread
Stained with
Saskatoon jam
And yesterday’s
News

Prussian
Is my
Favourite
blue

I’ll bet you
Didn’t know that
About
me

It really
Ought
To be
Easier
To
Die

Sharris's photo
Mon 01/11/10 09:44 AM
compelling and telling
heart wrenching

no photo
Mon 01/11/10 09:45 AM
sad for many the dying isn't easy, made even more difficult for those that love and mourn what once was---perhaps in the final seconds a glimpse of peace, and a calm letting gobrokenheart

:heart: sending love and light your wayflowerforyou flowerforyou

TxsGal3333's photo
Mon 01/11/10 10:21 AM
:heart: Heartfelt:heart:

At times one must hear from others it is time to let go in order for them to start living again........flowers

jimz's photo
Mon 01/11/10 02:19 PM
wow post more pleasse awesomeflowerforyou

no photo
Mon 01/11/10 04:10 PM
Astounding!
This is seriously brilliant.
I love it.

chrisgaits's photo
Tue 01/12/10 05:40 AM
The last 3 words scare me... because it is easy to die, the journey towards the end is what is hard.

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 01/12/10 07:03 AM
Thank you for reading and your comments everyone :heart: flowerforyou :heart:


(((Sharris))) thank you ... I hope you are finding calmer seas in your world :heart:

(((pkd))) thank you ... and yes, I hope so ... :heart:

(((Txs))) the many layers ... flowers

(((Jim))) thank you Jim flowerforyou

(((PP))) thank you for reading and commenting ... I am humbled flowers

(((chris))) thank you for stopping by and welcome to the site flowerforyou Perspectives change depending upon circumstances ...


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carlos2342's photo
Tue 01/12/10 07:22 AM
When I was just a little boy,
playing with my simple toys,

playing at a little park,
simply day shades to dark,

the little payphone I approach,
dialing quick with every stroke,

my mother comes and she parks,
taking me home in the dark,

When I was a little boy,
never did I have electronic toys,

socializing and playing in the park,
no video games through day and dark,

no cellphone to call my mom before dark,
no gps to tell my mother where to park,

when I was just a little boy,
things were simple like my toys!

J.D.M



ArtGurl's photo
Tue 01/12/10 07:41 AM
Thanks for stopping by carlos flowerforyou


It is the simple things that are often hardest for the dying to detach from

carlos2342's photo
Tue 01/12/10 07:54 AM
I'm not dying :tongue:

ArtGurl's photo
Tue 01/12/10 08:22 PM
flowerforyou

s1owhand's photo
Tue 01/12/10 10:16 PM
:cry:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ztji4KYcLcs

Je Te Veux

J'ai compris ta détresse
Cher amoureux
Et je cède à tes vœux
Fais de moi ta maîtresse
Loin de nous la sagesse
Plus de tristesse
J'aspire à l'instant précieux

Où nous serons heureux
Je te veux

Je n'ai pas de regrets
Et je n'ai qu'une envie
Près de toi là tout près
Vivre toute ma vie
Que ton corps soit le mien
Que ma lèvre soit tienne
Que ton coeur soit le mien
Et que toute ma chair soit tienne

REFRAIN

Oui je vois dans tes yeux
La divine promesse
Que ton coeur amoureux
Vient chercher ma caresse
Enlacés pour toujours
Brûlant des mêmes flammes
Dans un rêve d'amour
Nous échangerons nos deux âmes....

(((Sherrie))) flowerforyou

kc0003's photo
Wed 01/13/10 08:13 AM
very nice (S) flowers

ArtGurl's photo
Sat 01/16/10 09:50 PM
(((s1ow))) flowers

(((kc))) flowers


Thank you :heart:

no photo
Sat 01/16/10 09:52 PM
Amazing write.flowerforyou