Topic: alone
sweetsimplesassy's photo
Thu 11/26/09 06:58 PM
Silence,
the whir of the dishwasher
a distant car,
thoughts that won't cease,
alone.

sad,
missing,
cold,
gone.
alone.

four walls,
memories,
still missing,
alone.

quietness,
blank walls,
mixed emotions,
still alone!

cherie091279's photo
Thu 11/26/09 06:59 PM
being alone sucks..great write

Sharris's photo
Thu 11/26/09 07:02 PM

Silence,
the whir of the dishwasher
a distant car,
thoughts that won't cease,
alone.

sad,
missing,
cold,
gone.
alone.

four walls,
memories,
still missing,
alone.

quietness,
blank walls,
mixed emotions,
still alone!


alone has so many faces,

writer_gurl's photo
Thu 11/26/09 07:24 PM
flowerforyou flowerforyou flowerforyou

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 11/26/09 08:04 PM
echoes of Poe, alone...nicely done

wish I had a dishwasher, then I wouldn't feel so "alone"...lol

sweetsimplesassy's photo
Thu 11/26/09 09:48 PM
Edited by sweetsimplesassy on Thu 11/26/09 09:49 PM

echoes of Poe, alone...nicely done

wish I had a dishwasher, then I wouldn't feel so "alone"...lol


TY!
I actually just moved into this place Friday(hence the blank walls, ect in the poem) Havent had a dishwasher in 4ever...lol (literally yrs)
I appreciate your comments. :)
ps...you can come over and we can sit and listen to the dishwasher together LMAO

HuckleberryFinn's photo
Thu 11/26/09 09:49 PM
ha, I'm old fashioned, I'll wash you dry...lol

Ladylid2012's photo
Thu 11/26/09 09:50 PM

Silence,
the whir of the dishwasher
a distant car,
thoughts that won't cease,
alone.

sad,
missing,
cold,
gone.
alone.

four walls,
memories,
still missing,
alone.

quietness,
blank walls,
mixed emotions,
still alone!



:cry: flowerforyou

sweetsimplesassy's photo
Thu 11/26/09 09:53 PM

ha, I'm old fashioned, I'll wash you dry...lol


thats the fun way to do it....lol
It is weird not having so many dishes to do by hand, not that just me and my 5 yr old have a lot anyways, but...
well shoot......we'll do the dishes by hand and run the washer just to hear the "whir" of it...lol (just for good measure...lol)

nastrack1's photo
Fri 11/27/09 12:52 AM
That's alone .but when you fall in love and ther not ther that's more loney yet. Hay be me dishwasher and you won't be alone ...lol..

no photo
Fri 11/27/09 01:06 AM


Silence,
the whir of the dishwasher
a distant car,
thoughts that won't cease,
alone.

sad,
missing,
cold,
gone.
alone.

four walls,
memories,
still missing,
alone.

quietness,
blank walls,
mixed emotions,
still alone!


alone has so many faces,

And felt in many places.......

This was nice to read, yet over-powering to remind me,

I am in the place, to have that face, never seen my trace


flowerforyou :wink: bigsmile Smile-and the world smiles within you, frown, and the world outside you, stares. wink.....