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It Always Rains
The sun is shining reflecting colorful prisms of what life should be glorious enchanting flowers bloom the trees reach out grasping my reality sadness despair for it always rains on the inside a blessing for me for I can see the rainbow that is you........ It has always been my belief that one must experience sadness to be able to relate to happiness. |
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very nice
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very true, very true
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sometimes a stained glass rainbow
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tear stained, blood stained, etched with emotion stain, yet when reflecting in the sunlight the beautiful kaledioscope of colorful hues always makes me wonder how racism still survives, especially since people skins have the same hues.....thanks all for reading
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very nice
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tear stained, blood stained, etched with emotion stain, yet when reflecting in the sunlight the beautiful kaledioscope of colorful hues always makes me wonder how racism still survives, especially since people skins have the same hues.....thanks all for reading hmmmm? after reading this it makes me wonder why you added the last three lines to your write...sort of steers the reader in another direction |
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Edited by
HuckleberryFinn
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Mon 11/16/09 12:38 PM
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has nothing to do with the poem, it was in reference to the stained glass comment....
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Very nice Huck, I wonder too about racism...even though every last one of us bleeds
red. Perhaps we are just hardwired to be xenophobic to mellonin (<--sp??) |
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tear stained, blood stained, etched with emotion stain, yet when reflecting in the sunlight the beautiful kaledioscope of colorful hues always makes me wonder how racism still survives, especially since people skins have the same hues.....thanks all for reading racism is instinctive, the acceptance of such instinct is the crime, but we are only human. |
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has nothing to do with the poem, it was in reference to the stained glass comment.... ok thought it was a little off...thanks for clarifying |
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very nice
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