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Simply wonderful...delightfully complex....beautifully written....Thank you for knowing how to write... <-------tips hat to ms. (M) thank you madam i told you, once in a while i get it right...  You are a rarity on this earth and my love for you is more deserving than a cliché ^love does seem like a bad cliche' these days does it not...nicely done yes it certainly does at times...thanks for the comment..
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awesome write your one of my favorites thank you pam....but, we are not supposed to have favorites..  |
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is that what you call it?  no she called it i was just thinking aloud... you are certainly free to call it anything you wish...  then i would call it a damn good write
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That is an amazing piece-
Something I think everyone can truly relate to and you got it down to a "T".. Excellent !!! |
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Edited by
iam4u
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Mon 11/02/09 07:48 PM
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If I had your phrase of writeful ways, I could start out new to better days, to write a book for all to see. Knowing they would envy me and want to be. I am like trash compared to your skills of lessons learned. Needs of love can be found in all your words earned. GREAT WRITE BRO... 
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Edited by
iam4u
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Mon 11/02/09 08:00 PM
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Heres one better.
YOU are to wrtting what I am to compassion for others,wink...lol You with pen in hand, And me with arms wide open... lol
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That is an amazing piece- Something I think everyone can truly relate to and you got it down to a "T".. Excellent !!! thank you i appreciate your comment
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If I had your phrase of writeful ways, I could start out new to better days, to write a book for all to see. Knowing they would envy me and want to be. I am like trash compared to your skills of lessons learned. Needs of love can be found in all your words earned. GREAT WRITE BRO... trash?....rubbish, i have read you for a long time and you too get your point across....and the book? well lets just say i way too much to learn before i take that on. thank you my friend i do appreciate the support you have always shown me... |
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If I had your phrase of writeful ways, I could start out new to better days, to write a book for all to see. Knowing they would envy me and want to be. I am like trash compared to your skills of lessons learned. Needs of love can be found in all your words earned. GREAT WRITE BRO... tra.sh?....rubbish, i have read you for a long time and you too get your point across....and the book? well lets just say i way too much to learn before i take that on. thank you my friend i do appreciate the support you have always shown me...  YOU WENT TWO PAGES HERE!,,, I NEVER get two pages,,,,,,,,lol,lol Thanks back to ya for your cool thoughts of me.. And to be real,,I can talk the talk, but YOU can talk and do the walk....there is a great readable indifference through an intelligent readers perspectives as to who and what a writer is capable of and also more usually, their profound use of grammar and English qualities, that THEY follow,wink,,,ME a street poet,,you an author See, falling short of your normal wisdom and writes, YOU could be a rappin junk word junky like me,wink. I on the other hand, would have to do a lot of reading, trails, and checking,,,to even TRY and be READ as good as you do... Thus,,,,,,,,,me be white trash, and YOU BE movin on UP!!!!lol Wink,,,thus,,,trash,,,,,,,YOUR HONOR, I rest my case.....wink,lol To great writes for great people to try and acomplish,,,,
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Edited by
iam4u
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Mon 11/02/09 09:57 PM
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If you need to learn to write, then I need to learn my alpha's all over. Great read.
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If you need to learn to write, then I need to learn my alpha's all over. Great read. ha! no i think you have quite a handle on that...you have been a very welcomed and appreciated addition to our little slice of this site... thank you for posting a reply...
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If you need to learn to write, then I need to learn my alpha's all over. Great read.
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Such romance and feeling and passion falls from your pen. Writing of love....your expressions...perfection my friend.
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Such romance and feeling and passion falls from your pen. Writing of love....your expressions...perfection my friend. perfection is a little much but, i thank you just the same... |
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Such romance and feeling and passion falls from your pen. Writing of love....your expressions...perfection my friend. perfection is a little much but, i thank you just the same... I'm entitled to my opinion
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Such romance and feeling and passion falls from your pen. Writing of love....your expressions...perfection my friend. perfection is a little much but, i thank you just the same... I'm entitled to my opinion and you voice it too.....always with tact....
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wonderful , inspiration.
Teacher Teach me to pen. To dip this quill. Over and over, Once and again, still. T'would better that love, Stare through your pane. Than grains on the shore, Disappear, feign remain. Oh, teach me of love. This tormenting inferno. Free my soul, cease, This ache, death, that we know. Your student am I. Fill this empty well. Etch on this tapestry. To keep me from hell. Raine Les 11/4/2009 |
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