Topic: The moment.
Jimmyjabes's photo
Sun 06/14/09 03:23 AM
I see, I see, what lie you’ve just told to me.

I see what’s right there… in front of me

The breath I took, the air that you breathe.

Not the scent of my cologne coming back at me.

I slept soundly, with dreams of you filling my head

Behind your eyes, is the truth, is it that which I dread?

Where have you been my love? Do you fear to tell?

Your temporary pleasure, my permanent hell.


You reek of passion, un known to me, And In your once

Loving eyes, I see all that I need to see.

Love was made this night, just not between you and me.

Jimmyjabes's photo
Sun 06/14/09 03:33 AM
Short and sweet.
The land is jealous of your beauty, the very air cannot match your grace.
My hands are humbled and shaking as I gently touch your face. The world around us disappears while I remain in your embrace. You still my soul and calm my fears, you are the source of my joy, my comfort and my tears. plesent thoughts fill my mind when you are near, my paradise is seen in your eyes, blue waters so clear.




AngelLight's photo
Sun 06/14/09 05:52 AM
Wow. Both are really good Jimmy. Ty & welcome flowerforyou

Jimmyjabes's photo
Sun 06/14/09 05:55 AM
Thank you I just wanted to share them I have others and in time i'll post

AngelLight's photo
Sun 06/14/09 06:23 AM

Thank you I just wanted to share them I have others and in time i'll post



You're welcome. We look forward to what you have to share.

A_Zo's photo
Sun 06/14/09 07:53 AM
Loved reading that man that was so surreal to me. I am for sure looking for some more of your work. Dam good man , just dam good!!:thumbsup:

Bi_CurizGrl's photo
Sun 06/14/09 01:33 PM
wow....that poem really got to me....:cry: flowerforyou :heart:

Jimmyjabes's photo
Sun 06/14/09 02:38 PM
Thanks man I enjoy writing from time to time, and I hope that some of my work will inspire others to do the same, it's therapeutic in a sense.
Ad astra per aspera.

Jimmyjabes's photo
Sun 06/14/09 04:39 PM
Softly


I heard your footsteps this day following mine, for every one I took two of yours trailed closely in time. I slowed my breath as I turned to see, that what I thought was two remains only me.
I sighed a sigh that lovers know well, from the recesses of my heart, where the longing does dwell.