Topic: read this!
lucky_mexican's photo
Fri 09/22/06 09:54 AM
"Precious Moments"
Life is something wonderful
Filled with precious moments
That we keep forever in our hearts,
We often go back in time
We often bring those moments alive,
We love to explore those moments
Because it soothes our hearts and minds
Out of all those precious moments
There's always a special one
And the most special moment
It's when you came into my life,
The very first time I saw your face
The very first time I saw your smile,
That's why my life is something special!
Filled with precious moments,
That I will keep forever in my heart!.

Martin Valenzuela

Copyright ©2006 Martin Valenzuela

tretia's photo
Fri 09/22/06 11:13 AM
ok, i was already cryin cuz i got this broken heart thing going on right
now..what you tryin to do to me? haha

thats beautiful..thank you..gotta love poetry!

chica42ny's photo
Fri 09/22/06 11:15 AM
hi tretia don't cry be strong got to run. kids are out of school

chismah's photo
Fri 09/22/06 11:17 AM
Hey guy...don't feel bad..there's plenty of women and ladies out there
for you...there's probably 10,000 + ladies in your area right now...why
not go out and have fun tonight with a movie and then dancing and
dinner...get out there and have fun & mingle...the more you sit there
and let life go by you...a great gal goes by...you know what I mean??
^_^ cheer up!!

Jimi366's photo
Fri 09/22/06 11:37 AM
It took me til I was 40 years old (just turned 40) to
not let the past get in my way. It really takes away
from the quality of the PRESENT. Great poem tho. I'm
into poetry.

wcxidave's photo
Fri 09/22/06 11:44 AM
That was a wonderful and very heartfelt. Thank You for posting it.
Dave

no photo
Wed 10/18/06 12:04 PM
Beautiful

MLG40's photo
Tue 09/02/08 05:41 AM

"Precious Moments"
Life is something wonderful
Filled with precious moments
That we keep forever in our hearts,
We often go back in time
We often bring those moments alive,
We love to explore those moments
Because it soothes our hearts and minds
Out of all those precious moments
There's always a special one
And the most special moment
It's when you came into my life,
The very first time I saw your face
The very first time I saw your smile,
That's why my life is something special!
Filled with precious moments,
That I will keep forever in my heart!.

Martin Valenzuela

Copyright ©2006 Martin Valenzuela


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