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Topic: A Look Inside
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Tue 08/05/08 10:29 AM
Edited by bigblue29 on Tue 08/05/08 11:11 AM
A thousand words could and have been said of a womens; eyes, hair, lips, and hips but that is not the core. That is just a precursur a beckoning invitation to the depths. The core......it's well beyond the wisdom of the eye, the flick of a lock, the passion driven lips and the hypnotic sway of the hips. He whom dares travel to the perfect balance, the eye of the storm, perhaps then you are prepared for a lifetime of education and anticipation. Diving into what the french call......L'oublier. Translated not "The Forgotten" but "The Bottomless". A journey seldom realized by even the women herself. Sailing through the oceans of tears for every emotion, flying over the fires of indignation, and yet still never possessing the key to the undestructible fragility. The place where logic originates and disipates, ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and imageless mirrors. A universe of shoebox size compartments labeled in a language unbenounced to man.

Sharris's photo
Tue 08/05/08 10:33 AM
such beauty to hope for..in being

constancewrites's photo
Tue 08/05/08 10:41 AM

A thousand words could and have been said of a womens; eyes, hair, lips, and hips but that is not the core. That is just a precursur a beckoning invitation to the depths. The core......it's well beyond the wisdom of the eye, the flick of a lock, the passion driven lips and the hypnotic sway of the hips. He whom dares travel to the perfect balance, the eye of the storm, perhaps then you are prepared for a lifetime of education and anticipation. Diving into what the french call......L'oublier. Translated not "The Forgotten" but "The Bottomless". A journey seldom realized by even the women herself. Sailing through the oceans of tears for every emotion, flying over the fires of indignation, and yet still never possessing the key to the undestructable fragility. The place where logic originates and disipates, ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and imageless mirrors. A universe of shoebox size compartments labeled in a language unbenounced to man.



Beautiful sentiments, and thank you for sharing. Nicely written. You may try running it through MS Word though. A lot of misspellings. (Not being rude, just trying to help, because the content is so good it should be made almost perfect, as your thoughts are worthy of perfection in their display). My favorite line: " Sailing through the oceans of tears for every emotion, flying over the fires of indignation, and yet still never possessing the key to the (indestructible) fragility." Very nice words from what must be a fascinating mind.
Respect,
C

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Tue 08/05/08 10:45 AM
Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou

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Tue 08/05/08 11:14 AM
such beauty to hope for..in being
Thank you Sharris!

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Tue 08/05/08 11:17 AM
Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou
I'm flattered you think so.....thank you for reading and your wonderful comment.

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Tue 08/05/08 11:17 AM
Edited by bigblue29 on Tue 08/05/08 11:37 AM
Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou
Double post sorry.

txmomof2's photo
Tue 08/05/08 11:24 AM
As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric.

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Tue 08/05/08 12:02 PM
As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric.
Thank you, very sweet of you.

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Tue 08/05/08 02:59 PM
Nicely done!

AngelLight's photo
Tue 08/05/08 03:09 PM
".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....."



So beautifully stated flowerforyou :heart:

MsWiz would love to see your write .....

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Wed 08/06/08 09:31 AM
".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....." So beautifully stated flowerforyou :heart: MsWiz would love to see your write .....
Thanks Angel, i posted this poem to the challenge already.

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Wed 08/06/08 10:05 AM

".....ironically light eminates. The source of humanity. Mankinds beacon. The abyss of revolving doors and....." So beautifully stated flowerforyou :heart: MsWiz would love to see your write .....
Thanks Angel, i posted this poem to the challenge already.


I just saw it. Great job bb :thumbsup:

TxsGal3333's photo
Wed 08/06/08 11:15 AM

Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou


Ditto, words from a wise manflowers

flame1cutie's photo
Wed 08/06/08 11:21 AM
:smile: flowers

txmomof2's photo
Wed 08/06/08 08:15 PM

As I said earlier. You are an amazing man Eric.
Thank you, very sweet of you.



you're welcome

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Thu 08/07/08 11:41 AM
Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou
Ditto, words from a wise manflowers
a journey to be wise to the core of a women is worth traveling.

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Thu 08/07/08 11:46 AM

Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou
Ditto, words from a wise manflowers
a journey to be wise to the core of a women is worth traveling.

most men don't think that way these days Eric but it's nice to see that there are some that do...flowers

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Thu 08/07/08 04:11 PM
Ahhh tis a man who knows how to woo a woman with words! Well done!flowerforyou
Ditto, words from a wise manflowers
a journey to be wise to the core of a women is worth traveling.
most men don't think that way these days Eric but it's nice to see that there are some that do...flowers
Well Amanda thank you for saying so.

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Fri 08/08/08 12:42 PM
hmmmmm

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