Awwwwww that is absolutely beautiful, i love the spiritual message within this beautiful heartfelt poem,, truly inspiring, such beautiful creative writing, let this be your first piece of writing, not your last, because that would be a crime for someone so very talented and able to capture a readers attention and imagination, i look forward very muvh so to reading more of your wonderful work xx

very lovely, i really like the spiritual tone, well done

wow thats beautiful, and ultimately has struck a chord in me well done great expression

aww thankyou, funny, true, but so frustrating, glad im not the only onr to have experienced the loons and the liars lol, hope we all find happiness on here eventually xx

Unpacking our cases there lay heavy tension in the air,
It had taken us so much time effort and drama to arrive there,
I sat on the bed a coffee in my hand ,
Smoking my cigarette gazing out at the land,
She came sweeping through from the shower wrapped scantilly in a towel,
looking my way intensely like she was on the prowl,
She passed me a brush, i brought it gently down her long dark hair,
In sheer bliss for at that moment we were both together there,
She turned to face me and locked her eyes deeply with mine,
For the next few moments it felt like a pause in time,
Her green eyes always made my heart melt,
She always stirred feelings in me till then still unfelt,
Her potent heady perfume struck a deep unstirred arousel,
I hid my face in her neck, her hair surrounded,
I wanted to stay there in that sweet loving embrace,
Where i could hide in contentment from the fears that i faced,
But all too soon she stood up to get ready for dinner,
Soon that evening our love would become thinner,
We ordered our meal and poured the wine,
For a little while longer she would remain mine,
she stared deeply in to my eyes across the table,
A conversation we held where words were enabled,
I knew the questions would come all too soon,
My heart quivered at the forth coming doom,
I couldnt lie to her, but how could i tell her the truth,
Your husband found out and raped me, but babe i have no proof,
Before we had chance to eat she said babe we need to talk,
She drank back her wine and said lets go for a walk,
Under the moon we walked for a while in silence,
Then she stopped and turned to me the air heavy and intense,
Please tell me the truth now, and dont lie she asked,
I wont leave you no matter what, her emotions expertly masked,
He raped you, didnt he, she said babe i know,
Just tell me the truth or i promise you ill go,
Tears falling rapidly and fear hitting my heart,
Yes i replied, the memory beginning to smart,
Everything fell deafeningly quiet it felt for an age,
Then from nowhere it came fast her pain and her rage,
How could you do this to me, how could you keep it hidden,
The blame she pushed on me, his sin she was dismissing,
She screamed she cried, she turned her head away in pain,
Id done nothing wrong but she made me feel so ashamed,
I tried to comfort her, i tried to make her see,
I hadnt betrayed her, hed betrayed me,
But in her heartache and in her pain,
She ran away and left me sobbing alone in the rain,
I looked eveywhere for her, i scoured the castles ground,
But it was useless searching, she couldnt be found,
I went back to our hotel room, alone and out of my mind,
I gathered all of the alcohol and pills i could find,
I couldnt clear my mind or all of the confusion,
In my head it made sense this was the only sensible conclusion,
I filled a pint glass full of vodka and tipped all the tablets out on the bed,
Popping pill after pill swigging vodka back no doubt in my head,
Pain ripping through my heart,thoughts too painfull to process,
I carried on popping pills swigging back vodka with a demented madness,
Let me die, i screamed, i want this to stop,
My pills taken, and alcohol all gone, not another drop,

In temper that i was still there i smashed the glass against the wall,
I started ripping the shards through my wrists thinking f>>k it all,
Blood spurted everywhere up the walls and the door,
A few minutes later i passed out cold on the floor,
In the early hours my moms spirit came to me,
You have to go back its not your time, i cant take you baby,
The morning light came i heard shuffling in the room,
I came round to stern looks and an air filled with gloom,
She stood over me so angry, and screamed i wish youd died,
Then she grabbed me in her arms and for hours we cried,
I fought against her parting our embrace,
She held my wrists to me making me look in disgrace,
Why she cried to me over and over again,
How selfish you were i could have returned and found you dead,
She cleaned my sore savaged wrists and bandaged them quietly,
When shed finished she dropped with sadness and exhaustion to her knees,
She pulled me beside her, her crying sorry, me crying please,
We stayed there for the longest time clutched tightly to one another,
In a final embrace that was almost a smother,
In the morning light we both sadly knew it was the end,
Sobbing uncontrollably as she walked away, a lost lover and bestfriend.

brill write, so true, many will relate

wow very thought provoking, i like your train of creative thought

The bleep of my phone jumps me out of my daze,
Another message from the dating site focuses my gaze,
Her picture there staring at me,
First thought in my head, shes far too pretty for me,
A flicker of hope dashed in a moment,
Sometimes these dating sites cause too much torment,
I go back through my views, whos this new woman i see,
Mild excitement slowly building up inside of me,
Reading her profile with eager anticipation,
Has my heart beating faster sending my mind racing,
Deciding i like all that ive just read,
I send her a message, awaiting a reply, with dread,
A few moments later that familiar bleep rings out,
Shes just messaged me back, to my friend i shout,
What did she say, asked my friend with glee,
She said thanks for the message, would you like to meet me,
I tap out the keys and reply to her, yes a drink would be nice,
She replies back as quickly, that new pub in town this friday night?,
Yes shall we say seven thirty?, see you soon,
Have i got anything nice to wear?, i run to my room,
All of my clothes spread out on my bed,
This top and these jeans will be perfect, my friend said,
Friday evening and my stomachs in a knot with nervous tension,
I walk in the pub and take a deep breath back with apprehension,
Shes standing smiling waving me over,
Oh god i need a drink, i cant do this sober,
Is this really her shes nothing like her photo,
A strong disapointed feeling sweeping over me, oh no,
Oh well im here now, maybe when we chat it wont be so bad,
An hour later, this dates the worst that ive had,
I make my excuses say my polite goodbye,
As i walk away a frustrated tear falls from my eye,
Why do i keep going out on these disapointing dates,
Cant i just be happy with my family and mates,
But my heart cries out, i need true love of my own,
So back to keyboard, to search again when i get home.

awww thankyou so much, i can but hope and wait and see hey,, i wish you luck in your quest for love too

I know that the moon will rise and the sun will set,, but I beg of you please don't forget,, you heard my wish you heard my plea,, please bring my true longlasting love to me,, I want to bask in the warmth of her love,, experience all the magic you send from above,, I want to fall in to her arms,, and glory in all of her hidden charms,,I want to feel my heart again miss its beat,, whilst I smile yet tremble at her feet,, to look deeply in to her beautiful eyes,, and know she's feeling for me likewise,, to feel her hair sweep my face,, and know I've fallen far from grace,,to feel the passion rise and ignite,, the love we share taking us deep in to the night,, hear my wish and hear my plea,, please remember to send this woman for me,, too long I've waited all alone,, bring me my love to know that I'm home.

Ahh thankyou so much

Awww thankyou

Your love is for what I ache and long,, it feels so right although its wrong,, you smile at me and my heart you melt,,a love like this before I've never felt,,you hold out your arms for me alone,, I step inside and I know I'm home,, you gently stroke my cheek and I get lost in your gentle stare,,, I can't seem to look away you've captured me then and there,, you bring your lips to mine and my heart it skips a beat,, I tremble top to bottom and almost pass out with our heat,,but then I feel them press gently on to mine,, and the passionate long deep kisses we share are heavenly divine,, lost in that moment lost in that kiss,, right or wrong goes out the window and creeping doubts they get dismissed,, something just takes over our souls connect as one,, lost in your arms lost in your love at the passion we shared made the woman in me shone,,I've never felt it before,, nor will I again,, this sheer forfillment and pure content,,you made my soul sing like a dove,, you were my one and only true love.