Topic: Not my time.
Annyjo's photo
Sun 09/08/13 11:11 AM
The Angel appeared before me his face so full of anguish his hands pressed against his heart. His wings came to wrap around me as he gently wiped away my tear, he blew kisses upon my face and suddenly there was no fear.
without effort he lifted me from the floor lay me down on the bed and with whispers of his voice this is what he said.
Your loved one is happy, there is no pain ,for they have repented, they hold no shame. Be happy for them, do not greave for your loss to long, for you will not heal you must become strong.
Pick yourself up wipe your tears away, sing a happy song, live for the day.




pandora39's photo
Sun 09/08/13 11:18 AM
Awwwwww that is absolutely beautiful, i love the spiritual message within this beautiful heartfelt poem,, truly inspiring, such beautiful creative writing, let this be your first piece of writing, not your last, because that would be a crime for someone so very talented and able to capture a readers attention and imagination, i look forward very muvh so to reading more of your wonderful work xx:smile: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana: :banana:

GYs41's photo
Sun 09/08/13 12:05 PM
Annyjo,

I agree completely with pandora39. This is a lovely sentiment and a skillfully crafted verse. I too see your talent...as you said about my poem, the pain is so evident, but your poetic expression creates a soothing halo above it. I hope you feel this too.

G.

Annyjo's photo
Sun 09/08/13 12:16 PM
Hiya, thank you for your kind words, I guess we are both still feeling the pain. Yet we know life must go on. We have to find happiness as best we can , take care and smile xx

Annyjo's photo
Sun 09/08/13 12:17 PM
thank you , I love your writing too x