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Lonely were the days,
Fate as it says! God was the only trust, Who gave hope to be a must! Dark nights knew my tears, But my soul did not have any fears! Broken wings of mine weren't painful, But ignorance from my dear ones left me sorrowful! I had strength to overcome the insults thrown on me, For I knew there wasn't any beside me! I did not wander for care, As love did not bless me fair! Started painting the path with my poems as I walked, For I had no one beside even to talk! Lonely were the days, Fate as it says! My feathers started withering away, But my legs kept walking far away! Feared only for ignorance, So remained lonely without a significance! Let me remain Lost and Unknown! As I can't sustain ignorance from the well known! Let me breathe until God desires, Until then let me remain lonely with what life acquires! -Aatheera |
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Good poem! Keep writing.
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Absolutely relatable and so expressive
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Good poem! Keep writing. Thank you 
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Absolutely relatable and so expressive Thank you
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Nice poem
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Nice poem .Thank you dear ❤ |
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Nice
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Nice Thanks Tee
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Lonely were the days, Fate as it says! God was the only trust, Who gave hope to be a must! Dark nights knew my tears, But my soul did not have any fears! Broken wings of mine weren't painful, But ignorance from my dear ones left me sorrowful! I had strength to overcome the insults thrown on me, For I knew there wasn't any beside me! I did not wander for care, As love did not bless me fair! Started painting the path with my poems as I walked, For I had no one beside even to talk! Lonely were the days, Fate as it says! My feathers started withering away, But my legs kept walking far away! Feared only for ignorance, So remained lonely without a significance! Let me remain Lost and Unknown! As I can't sustain ignorance from the well known! Let me breathe until God desires, Until then let me remain lonely with what life acquires! -Aatheera nice 
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wat do u desire more than anything in this world aatheera??
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That's a very good question. I await the answer.
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Guess, the answer lies within my poem..
 Have good times littlebuddy n Nick
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U need a consoler
Not a controller With more passion Not compassion One to drive away ur loneliness With affection more not less Always to consult Not to insult If so Wipe out your tears Without any fears Let new wings grow Like Phoenix u glow May someone be your aside It is better to you,decide. |
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U need a consoler Not a controller With more passion Not compassion One to drive away ur loneliness With affection more not less Always to consult Not to insult If so Wipe out your tears Without any fears Let new wings grow Like Phoenix u glow May someone be your aside It is better to you,decide. @Peppa, let's not discuss on the needs of mine please, if you can understand in the right way, as we haven't known each other n assumptions in your poems doesn't feel appropriate for me  I get to read nice poems from you n would wait to see newer ones on your own topics of interest too Happy Diwali |
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I agree
Wish u also a happy Diwali |
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N
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N ICEThank you
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Nice lyrics. Really good
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Lonely Forever
Lone-liness For A Moment For-ever Is Memories Along You Thier & Me Here Somewhere Somethings Thinking Of Eachother Nothing Last Forever So Even Loneliness Is A Time Of God Hopes We Are Living It On TOGETHER As Ever.............Robin Aatheera
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